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Reviews for FALLACY

By : Kalendral9
  • From Rosamund on March 24, 2010
    Love the story thus far!
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  • From Elvira on March 23, 2010
    AAAAHHHH!!!

    YES! NOW WE ARE GETTING SOMEWHERE!

    Loved it! OOOHHHH!!!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From danawarner on March 23, 2010
    Makes me wonder about Lily Evans Potter's parentage.
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  • From Elvira on March 23, 2010
    I think hermione is going to be Bella's daughter!

    Loved it!

    Update soon!
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  • From HeartStar on March 18, 2010
    Interesting I would like to see where you take this I'm assumeing that the baby was Hermoine Am I right?
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  • From Elvira on March 16, 2010
    OOOOHHH!!!


    This is good! Poor Bella! She thinks she lost her baby. Poor them. Update soon Please I want to see where the baby goes and how this story progresses!
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  • From MalysBates on March 16, 2010
    What an original and thought provoking premise for a story!

    This looks like it has the possibility to become an epic, so I hope that you will find the inspiration to continue it.

    Grammar and spelling seem to be excellent, although plotwise, I would have liked just a little more of the nurse's motivations; was she just bored by all this ministry mandated routine? Does she have a quota to fill and paperwork to do? Is she quietly upset because although the child was a dark scion, she was still taking a newborn from it's mother or proud of herself?

    Ugh, no wonder the wizarding world is having problems, It's well known (in canon) that all of the pureblood lines, light and dark, are related one way or another. Think of the unknowing consanguinuity... *shudders*

    Thank you for sharing this and I look forward to the next installment.
    'Tsuki
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 15, 2010
    OMG!!! Bella has a daughter somewhere out there?! The Ministry is taking their children? Not good!
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  • From Mixmasterk96 on March 15, 2010
    This is really good. Hope you finish it!
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