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Reviews for Passion Playground

By : thepretender501
  • From Veracityrules on April 03, 2010
    I just found your fic and it is f**king AWESOME! I love it and can't wait until the next update. ;)
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  • From ANON - bloodsoakedninja on April 02, 2010
    Ohh its getting good now. Draco doing a strip tease and a slight pole dance. Harry's in trouble now and Pansy is got a scheme brewing in the background. i wonder what Lucius is going to do when he finds out that his son isn't as straight as he thought he was. great chapter cant wait for the next update. I looked forward every week for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Hitsuzen_hime on April 02, 2010
    Excellent new chapter! And I'm glad you enjoy the copy of the story, it's always painful to loose a particular favorite!


    I wanted to let you know that I don't think that your chapters are too long at all, you're covering just the right amount in that you fully show a 'scene' in the story and break off when the scene is over. Not too long but just long enough to tell the chapter that you set out to tell. Please don't feel pressured to make your stories shorter because you think the fans don't want to read or don't have time to read, for a truly enjoyable story we MAKE time and I think perhaps your dual narrative might suffer if it looses any of the natural 'feel' you have for each PoV. Just my two cents, keep writing girls this is a great piece of fanfiction, I look forward to your next update!
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  • From BleedingHearts on April 02, 2010
    You've GOT to post the next chapter soon, even I got horny at Draco's striptease. XD
    I've got to know what Lucius will do. God, I love the Malfoys. Nearly as much as I love this fic.
    Update soon. I beg you.
    And if u have a mailing list, will you keep me updated? My address is pinkbunniesrevil@hotmail.com.
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  • From Juana13 on April 02, 2010
    stupid harry!!!!
    and where did poor draco go???
    please update again soon!!!!!! can't wait!!
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  • From mriypromene on April 02, 2010
    Draco stripping...Harry's reaction....fan oneself, take a perpetual cold show, ice cube bath...---repeat

    In the moments of questionable clarity wonder who fucked up Harry so much during his Auror days to swear off relationships.
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  • From SilentDreamer on April 02, 2010
    You all sooo evil!! Getting me worked up for him to not finish! EVIL! Pure evil!! So totally loving this! ;)
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on April 02, 2010
    Love it...i can't wait for that confrontation.
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  • From Galactus on April 02, 2010
    I have always appreciated authors who take the opportunity to make their fanfiction more than just fuck pieces, who bother to develop a little story arc to give weight to their works. This is easily one of the best in that respect, it flows easily and doesn't waste time while also building considerable tension for the final sexual confrontation. Also two other surprising things that don't usually work that hit home here; the sex scene is surprisingly sparse of elaborate sexual imagery but it actually accentuates it rather than take away; and two that both Draco and Harry have completely different personalities than in the original books which usually turns me off but works considerably well here. Very strong and worthwhile work in with the usually overburdened Harry/Draco genre.
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  • From ANON - kat on March 31, 2010
    Love it. Hope to see what happens next.
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  • From Toddy on March 29, 2010
    Of course we are interested [or should it be 'instested'?] You have just set up an intriguing scenario. More please?
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  • From spenny806 on March 29, 2010
    Seems so good! Keeps the chaparts coming!
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  • From axel2roxas2 on March 28, 2010
    YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!
    Huzzah for a new chapter!
    I totally loved how you included Legimency (I can't spell...sigh)! And I loved the whole elevator scene. His flat is so chic, I love it. Hmmm...I wonder what's going to happen to Draco when Pansy finds out/when he goes back to the Alley. Will Harry go back to Draco?
    UPDATE SOON!!!!
    albino
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  • From TCardan on March 27, 2010
    Great chapter. I love Harry's home:)

    I feel sorry for Draco. I hope Harry gives him a chance and falls for him too.

    Please update soon:)
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  • From SilentDreamer on March 27, 2010
    OMG!! I can't believe another story!! I love your work!! So definitely I want more of this... gotta admit nobody makes a whorish Harry better than you! Can't wait!! ♥♥♥♥
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