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From NightLo on May 08, 2010
Still I believe Harry has prejudice or serious difficulty in accepting good acts and good wishes from others...if he feels happy by helping people, why can't he understand it also makes us happy to help our beloved? To be honest, I believe Harry has very low acknowledgement or acceptance or praises of himself...something similar to low self esteem, just he doesn't act like one!!
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From ANON - Kibou32 on May 08, 2010
Hi.
I read this chapter and I thought it a bit subdued. And I also noticed that Draco kept licking his lips, does that not give the wrong impression to Harry who is angry with him for doing this on his own without regard to what he wants?
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From ANON - W on May 08, 2010
WOW... I really don't know what else there is to say to this awesome story...
I have to admit, I've been reading your stories for a few months (or even years?) now and I just really really like your style^^
I like it that you take your time and develop the story slowly, so that the characters stay believable and in-character.
And I also have a thing for Veela!Draco *evil grin*.
Your last chapter just blew me away! I so liked the tension between them and your out-of-control Harry was just soooo hot! *fans herself*
Please keep updating, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter!
*hugs fiercely*
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From ANON - Alex on May 08, 2010
I really like your newest story. Both ( Draco and Harry) are very in character. Their building relationship is totally awesome to follow even with the trust setback, which was so such an idiotic try to hasten things, but also typically Draco. I also love your original take on of the veela theme, that veela actually choose their chosen and do not die when refused.

I dearly hope that you won
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From ANON - Polka dot on May 07, 2010
Draco never would have gotten away with it. He's a wimp at killing, we already know that.
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From myniephoenix on May 07, 2010
Beautiful. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - KadyRae on May 07, 2010
This story is wonderful. Its very... realistic for me that harry and draco would have problems like this in this kind of situation. Having some experience with this kind of thing it is refreshing to have someone take the idea of rape very seriously, and not have the victim get over the scarring with the perfect partner right away. Its not so clean cut as all that, and even though Draco really wants to help Harry, he isn't perfect either.

I hope they manage to work it our for themselves, eventually, and that Draco will have the strength to not mess things up during the burning season.
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From ANON - anon. reader on May 07, 2010
you must update!!!
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From LadyofClunn on May 07, 2010
Ow, ow, owowow! It hurts!

I think they need to sit down and talk about this without trying to kill each other. Horrible things keep happening, they need a break!

So if Draco is telling Pansy that his information was false, what if she goes and gets the information from some other pure-blood? Then she will know that something's horribly fishy...

Oh goodness, I am so worried that the whole rape-of-the-chosen-one will be dragged out in the open and up and down the Prophet.

*peers through fingers*

It hurts so good. Can't wait for more.
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From ANON - lin sane on May 06, 2010
Very good story. I hope that Harry is able to understand that a family looking for a lost family member, at least on the outside, Isn't automatically bad and that Draco could be keeping with Harry's wishes and the MOM secracy on the case. Either way I hope you can keep posting great stories. Also, I have a suggestion. I know that alot of people do baker harry or pastery chef harry, but I haven't really ever seen wedding planner, for him at least. I think his need to help others and maybe his need to do something that envolves making people happy could lend well to this kind of thing. Also, with recent family experience, I think harry going into foster parenting would be interesting. I don't really see it much and with watching my niece get used to sharing with "new" older siblings recently being 3, would settle his need for family and the adaption to the troubles of children who might have been going through what he did as a child, a good way to settle past hurt.
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From serenagold on May 05, 2010
Uh oh. Draco is in trouble.
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From luvlustblood on May 05, 2010
Oh no!
I very much liked this chapter, but I will admit to being upset with the ending. Damn cliffhangers! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From NightLo on May 05, 2010
All the hard work is wasted!!! How will Draco convince Harry again?
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From SParker on May 04, 2010
about #16...

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From SoriaUndead on May 04, 2010
Aw... sad face. Poor Draco fucked up v_v

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