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Reviews for Veela-Struck

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Juana13 on April 03, 2010
    no!!!!! That's absolutely horrible!!!!
    Stupid lucius and narcissa for doing that to poor harry! even though they do not know the truth, the outcome was horrible.
    so what does this mean for draco? did harry break up with him??
    those two are so sad to read.
    i really hope the next chapter is happier, i hope they get back together or something!
    if it's not, i'm not sure what i'll do. the suspense and the grief of this story is overwhelming.
    update soon please. until then, i can't wait.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 01, 2010
    Draco singing to the tune of ''I'm walking on sunshine'': 'I'm walking
    on eggshells..w-e-e-ll..I'm walking in eggshells..w-e-e-ll..and it
    doesn't feel GOOD!

    Harry: What are you singing?

    Draco: Oh nothing. *sigh* You know I get the feeling Lomona is
    going to make this hard for me in this chapter.

    Harry: Well, she does have a tendency to have you go through changes.
    But, don't worry, it'll be good, halfway through the story..you know
    she'll drag it out before she puts her characters..and readers..out of
    their misery. *looks at author*

    Lomonaaeren: *points at herself* Who me??? I would NEVER do that.
    ^_~

    ***************
    *ahem* about #5....

    Sorry, got carried away up there.

    O-kay, Harry has a 'panic room'! I liked that..AND he gets to cut loose,
    unfortunately it's because of that waste of oxygen that resides in Azkaban.

    You just got to let Draco have a go at him! Please [and I don't say please often]!

    But, then again, I think Harry needs to confront him in the future and
    personally, I have NUTHIN' against the maiming of violators.

    All in all, their little lunch date was...sweet. I kind of wish it HAD been
    in the park. Brings to mind another song.

    Glad to see Harry taking those 'baby steps', you just can't keep a strong
    man down. :-)

    Speaking of strong men, whenever you write Harry this way, I always visualize
    him with a chiseled chin, strong piercing green eyes, a muscular hard body,
    layered hair that looks like it was attacked by the wind & shoulder length,
    5'11'', devilish smile...and let me stop!

    I won't mention voice.... :-p

    ..and nuff said until next time.
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  • From luvlustblood on April 01, 2010
    Wonderful.
    & I am quite glad that the story cannot go too quickly, as I very much enjoy reading it (now, and through the meltdowns, I'm sure). Although I am anxious for (steamy!) development as much as the next reader/hpdm fan, I am certain that it will be worth it.
    I enjoy the realness of it all, and wouldn't want to rush it at all. Can't wait for more.
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  • From NightLo on April 01, 2010
    In one way and the other, we cannot prevent ourselves from hurting others...maybe Harry really need to step down from a protective hen mode and trust others enough that...they can protect themselves on their own, with or without help...this is what friendship is - share...
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  • From LadyofClunn on April 01, 2010
    Very smart to confront Harry with his own protectiveness. Maybe he can see that this does not have to be a bad thing.

    I hope he'll be able to talk about his nightmares and make them less frightening. He is determined not to let what happened reign his life for ever - he has taken the next steps, hasn't he?

    Brilliant work, as always :)

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  • From ANON - Kibou32 on April 01, 2010
    Hi.

    I think I've reviewed a couple of your stories in fanfiction.net, I just wanted to let you know I covet all types of fanfiction that aren't PWP, or that deal with character development very well. I was hoping to learn whether Sympathy for Predators is over, or if you're writing another chapter. I liked chapter 8 but was hoping you'd write one or two more chapters to conclude it.


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  • From ANON - Amiyom on March 31, 2010
    I love this story! The boys are killing me though! Dancing around each other like that! I love how protective they are of each other-- so cute! Nice job!
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  • From 12blue12 on March 31, 2010
    aww how sweet *dopey grin* Draco really feels for harry and it shows so much in this chapter that its just amazing when i read of that much focused attention someone has on someone without succumbing to their own desires. well anyway i hope u update as soon as u can.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on March 31, 2010
    Aurors with an ax to grind, just like muggle cops.
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on March 31, 2010
    awesome!!
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  • From serenagold on March 31, 2010
    Aw, I like the manner in which they're building trust.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From serenagold on March 29, 2010
    I'm glad Draco asserted himself at the end there. Even without the trauma, relationships are hard enough to maintain as it is. Both of them need to work for each other in order for this to work or not.

    Keep up the great work! I'm really enjoying this story. ^^
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  • From luvlustblood on March 29, 2010
    Lovely, again. I can see this being a slow progression on Harry's part, which means many chapters...which means I'll have something to read for a while! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on March 29, 2010
    maybe they should do the unbreakable vow thing, then it'll be a contest of who lives longest (oh I'm in a cruel mood today)

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  • From HeartStar on March 29, 2010
    Very Cool I would love to see where you take this next.
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