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By : Lomonaaeren

From NightLo on June 09, 2010
I always believe trust builds on 2 sides...now finally Harry opens the doors and rebuilds his life, this is really fantastics to him. BTW, though he maybe astonished by the tactis used by Malfoys, his hidden Slytherin side must appreciate the complexity and influence from such association...Lastly, I believe some talks over arrangement on Blazing season is a must, and when will Harry realize the needs of Draco and take some actions?
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From Caldonya on June 09, 2010
I loved the bit about the parallel worlds especially as you wrote one.
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From thrnbrooke on June 09, 2010
Soooooo need chapter 28!!! Harry is now a "Malfoy". OMG!!!
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From ANON - polka dot on June 08, 2010
Pansy didn't want to get invollved with Draco because he was too possessive, a veela trait, then she falls in love with another veela. I am betting it's not love but bad magic.
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From ANON - SP777 on June 08, 2010
about #27...

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From ANON - qwerty on June 08, 2010
Great chapter! I cannot wait to see this plan in motion!
Keep writing!
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From LadyofClunn on June 08, 2010
Thank you so much for this chapter! There was so much love there!

The way Draco sniffed Harry's neck to memorise what he smelled like when trusting him, made me melt a little.

And the Malfoys! I always felt that they must be quite different behind closed doors. When I write them, they are always fiercely protective of their family and actually very loving and affectionate. I can see that here, too and it makes me so happy for Harry. Maybe, in the not-so-distant future, he will have the loving family he always dreamed of.

Wonderful!
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From koorimesbabygurl on June 08, 2010
yay the malfoys are involved and things seem to moving in favor for our boys, i love narcissa, i think she is scarier than her husband o.o no one messes with her boys and gets away with it lol. i'm happy harry is moving in the right direction being that he is slowly trusting people who he otherwise wouldn't bat an eyelash at. i think having the malfoys help will calm things down for a bit but with the blazing season coming up i do hope things don't get too out of hand. harry should lock draco in his panic room lol just kidding
cant wait for next update :D
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From NessaC on June 07, 2010
I really liked the juxtaposition of these two scenes, we really get a sense of how much Harry and Draco care for each other and what they are willing to do (or not do in this case) to preserve their fragile relationship. I suspect Pansy's role is going to get much more important now, especially with the revelation of Russell. Aah what one would do for love...

Great chapter :)

~Spiritxx
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From elfqueen114 on June 07, 2010
Why is Pansy so persistant? Is there another reason that she wants Laurent retried?
I love how powerful Draco is in this chapter and Harry as well! He is finally sticking up for himself.
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From thrnbrooke on June 07, 2010
Soooo need chapter 27!!!
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From luvlustblood on June 06, 2010
Lovely plot thickening. Can't wait for more!
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From koorimesbabygurl on June 06, 2010
wow parkinson you just made a friend your enemy and what makes it worse is that its draco. lol poor girl. ah well she dug her pit now let's see if she can climb her way out of it. and on both notes i am glad draco and harry resisted the urge to do what they thought was right, that in itself is a step to building their trust even more even when things hit the fan. let's hope things get better before they get worse :o crosses fingers >
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From NightLo on June 06, 2010
Well, I just hope Harry would be the first to realize Draco's veela needs than told to, as I think that would please and make Draco so happy...

I always believe...one character will show itself when he or she is in a foreign place without familiar people nearby, if he or she stays the same, he or she is the real person that they claim to be...now with Draco as well as Harry keeping each other promise and their trust, where trust extends even without the presence of the other...as they care too much that they are afriad of being the one to hurt, this is the beginning of a real relationship!!! BTW, Harry really doesn't need to frighten himself that he affects Draco so much and reduce him to be someone he dislike...the evil haunting Draco is back!
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From ANON - qwerty on June 05, 2010
I'm glad Draco realized how damaging using the allure on Pansy would have been on Harry (though it would have been easier on the very short-run). Pansy's so determined - I hope Draco will manage to thwart her. I'm thrilled that Harry recognized that he still needed more time off - he's really making progress!
Great chapter! Keep going!
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