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Reviews for Affairs of the Mind

By : ladytsince1985
  • From ANON - Alyssa on March 23, 2013
    I loved the story so far! Please write more!!
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  • From ladytsince1985 on May 06, 2010
    Thank you for your honest review :) ... I was hoping to get accross that sometimes in life things do happen very fast, she is very aroused by Snape and fears her marriage was a mistake ... I'll get another few chapters on and hopefully you will like it again .. Cheers, Lady T
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  • From Suzzanne on April 30, 2010
    ok I really loved chapter 1-3 but chapter 4 seems flawed. Hermiones fighting the urge yet makes out with snape....then comes to his letter and ready to play wife? or kisses his cheek after the apology? tucks his hair behind his ear? this chapter seems rushed and I think thats why I dislike it. She feels bad but immediately that inner conflict is forgotten and shes ready to play house. Or not really upset that hes planned to have her husband busy......anyway it just went from tantalizing and subtle building of their attraction that flowed really well to this rushed one(as in a much quicker pace than the last chapters). Your very talented; this chapter just seems slightly out of sink of the others.
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  • From use2b2t2 on March 21, 2010
    Interesting. I look forward to reading more.
    Mare
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