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Reviews for Essence Of Mudblood

By : EatableCrayon
  • From WesleyY7 on June 25, 2010
    Wow, you just threw us right into the thick of things from the very start! This is one of those stories/scenarios I know I should thing is wrong and not read it, but it's rather naughty and delicious all the same. I'm very interested in seeing where this is going as you've set it up to be about Hermione's "pleasure" since she can't be tainted with anything else. And they've only filled a fraction of the bottle! I love Ginny, but get a kick out of seeing evil!Ginny every once in a while, so her appearance is perfect. I do have to agree with the previous reviewer about the paragraph format, but I really enjoyed this. Poor Hermione. Hope you write a second chapter!
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  • From crinna on March 22, 2010
    i am interested in seeing the depths of depravity this story goes. i think its real kinky so far. i generally don't really care if a fic has some errors in it. hell we are doing this for fun, right!!! the only suggestion i would make is to use returns between paragraphs and dialog. i guarantee you will get more reviews if you do. it doesn't matter if its the best story in the world some people will go away without even reading when confronted with such a large block of text. editing will also allow you to re-post and put your story on the top of the list again, thus generating more interest. keep it up!!!!!!
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