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Reviews for Dazzle

By : IndexCardBox
  • From IndexCardBox on October 18, 2011
    Yes, that is mine too. I forgot my password and user and couldn't find the story. So I just reposted it. :) Thank's for finding it for me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2011
    http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600017867
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  • From IndexCardBox on February 06, 2011
    Thank you Kara. Your review brightened my day. I had thought that this story was a dud to readers, and wasn't planning on updating. I may write more in the future just due to your review, but, right now life is in the way. Just know that no matter how much time has passed, I remember this story and I will remember you are waiting for an update.
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  • From ANON - Kara on December 20, 2010
    screw what your other reviewers said, I adore this story!
    I re-read it a lot and yeah dean is a bit too perfect but thats what makes it unrealistic for me and i kind of like that, I love your writing style, its good and fluid and just to you know this story CREATES my arousal, never kills it.
    Please write more? I love it so much :D xxx Kara
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  • From IndexCardBox on April 02, 2010
    This is my first ever porn story. I am sorry it is not written well. I am not sure exactally how to write it and make it effective. It is different from anything I have ever written. I thank you for the input though. That is something I will have to try to fix and without you mentioning it, I wouldn't have known.
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  • From ANON - psi567 on April 01, 2010
    killed my arousal. And trust me, I've read some really sick stuff, but this is the first to have actually killed any arousal I had. And it's not that its so sick that i was unaroused. It was just so...boring. I'm not quite sure how to explain it. I think it's probably because it seems like Dean has Felix potion running through his veins. And he can do wandless magic while in his animagus form...Dean's winning too easily, so I can't enjoy this attempt at porn with plot.
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  • From IndexCardBox on March 22, 2010
    I know. I tried for a subtle play on disgust with himself for not being able to do anything about it. And because of that, he is taking it out on Ginny. If you'll notice in the HP series, he is a stupid ass the entire time, and he always follows emotions before his brain. Then again, all my characters are a bit OOC. I think I may be putting too much thought into it. After all, none of the characters on this site are in character.
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  • From ANON - Christopher on March 22, 2010
    Eh..... Ron's just being an asshat in this story, to be blunt about it.
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