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By : NutsAboutHarry
  • From ANON - Tim Deck on April 15, 2010
    It is soooo nice seeing regular updates. Especially with the chapters being this funny. I wonder if Ron and Hermione will have to go through all or most of the numbers they are looking up or if they will get lucky and find Hermione's parents quickly. The one question I have about this chapter is this, how long did it take you to come up with all of those names Ron and Hermione called each other after they finished at the library for the day? Those deffinately had me laughing. Keep up the great work and update again soon please.
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  • From Daye on April 11, 2010
    :-D Plane sex! Though enlarging the toilet to do it is kinda cheating isn't it? You still need those commas and the dialogue some times uses oddly formal sounding phrases when you usually its more slangy. Still not bad at all.
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  • From Rosamund on April 08, 2010
    another awesome, long chapter! loved it! can't wait for finding the parents...and more weasleys!
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on April 07, 2010
    A great chapter. Loved how overly excited Mr. Weasley kept getting at all the different aspects of the airport. I was hoping Ron and Hermione would join the mile high club and you did not disappoint. Can't wait to see how long it takes them to find Hermione's parents and what her parents' reaction will be to the whole situation. Keep up the great work and update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on April 04, 2010
    Like usual the story flowed nicely. Colin's funeral was nice, though I would have liked to hear Harry's speach. For Avanell, if you like Neville stuff I recommend reading 'It started with a kiss'(one of the other stories nutsaboutharry wrote). It is a great story focused on Neville that I for one certainly enjoyed. I always wondered how the golden trio would be received at Gringotts after they robbed and wrecked the place. Ron's comments about the goblin and the dragon were priceless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
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  • From Daye on March 29, 2010
    I got about halfway through this chapter before Realising why I was having a bit of trouble reading it. You haven't used any commas. None at all. You need to use them to break down the longer sentences into phrases. And also at the end of speeches. Another nitpick; the word is ridicolous, not Redicolous.

    There's nothing wrong with the story itself but the grammar could use some work.
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  • From MIverson on March 28, 2010
    Great story. Are you going to be posting more of it soon? I can't wait to read more about the further adventures of Ron and Hermione. I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

    Cosmyk Angel
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  • From Rosamund on March 28, 2010
    Awesome second chapter! Loved everything...and nice to see Lavender with them and the rest of the gang. I DO hope you have Neville's parents coming out of their state...and can't wait for more Hermione/Ron adventures!
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  • From Rosamund on March 24, 2010
    Love it so far! Harry outplanning Hermione for the trip was hilarious!
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  • From ANON - Tim Deck on March 23, 2010
    A great start to the fic. The foundation is set very well and I can't wait to see how Ron reacts during the plane ride. It's nice to see this tied in to your other fics. That makes for a very satisfying read. As always keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next update.
    Oh yeah, to all readers who haven't yet read her other stories I highly recommend taking the time to read them. Not only will they make you laugh, but as I said before they all tie in with each other.
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  • From Daye on March 23, 2010
    A nice start, though some of the character seem a little off. Especially with the amount of swearing. I like the idea of them having to use Muggle transport. The Comic possibilities of trying to get Ron through an airport... :D

    Still I'd imagine the casualties of the Battle Of Hogwarts would probably have one massive funeral/memorial that days of individual ones.
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