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Reviews for Moon Worshipers

By : emeraldeyedsnake
  • From chrissy on December 02, 2013
    Cool story!! Look forward to seeing just what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Faery66 on June 16, 2013
    Hope to read more soon.

    =D
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  • From AbbyRose on September 12, 2012
    SO this was definitely super interesting, in an awesome way. Can't wait for more! Im curious as to all scales- stuff too, so do explain later in chapter. :D Great job.
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  • From QueenReader on March 15, 2011
    What a horrible place to stop! I hope you get 20 or 30 reviews at least so you don't get disgusted and quit. I am really looking forward to what comes next. I'd love to know when you update this story.
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  • From Smailii1805 on August 31, 2010
    Hello!

    I have this very strange liking for the pairing ever since I read "Sweet Puppy" and therefore I give every story with it a chance. However, it was hard for me to understand your story and get into the plot. Apparently you expect your reader to read a very long introduction where you explain the 'background' before they can read the story itself.

    I strongly advice you to integrate any kind of information your reader needs for understanding INTO the text itself. Additional explainations shouldn't be necesssary (Especially NOT in the middle of the chapter - best way to destroy any kind of atmosphere there might have been before) if you do your job right. Interrupting the "flow" should also be avoided unless it's ABSOLUTELY necessary.

    I would most probably give this story a second chance if you took my advice to heart, but right now I don't feel so inclined. It's much like watching a movie: Would you enjoy it if you had to listen someone explain the background before the movie started and then stopping it here and then to tell you what this and that scene means? No? I don't, either.

    Sorry if this sounds very negative. Just see it as an opportunity to make this a better story.
    Fr
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  • From firewolf1800 on July 15, 2010
    squeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice but for the love of all that is yaoi please update soon
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  • From worriorbookwyrm on June 28, 2010
    Wow, this is cool. I jsut love Fenir/Harry and this is really creative. Please write more.


    P.S. I will keep reviewing so don't wait for others just write. Thanks
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  • From jgoodman on June 20, 2010
    love this story, please update
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  • From Avivafae on March 31, 2010
    You definitely have an interesting story here; however you don't have to explain things to your readers quite so much. We'll get the gist of what you're writing about anyway. And if you must do so try leaving it all in a note at the beginning or end of the story. When you put one in the middle it takes the reader out of the world you've built. It's like putting a commercial in the middle of a good part of a movie.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on March 27, 2010
    Interesting concept. I think Harry should have asked for extra powers or something. What did he ask for anyway?
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  • From alma on March 26, 2010
    Good chapter!
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  • From alma on March 26, 2010
    Ooh, I like!
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  • From Blackrose451 on March 25, 2010
    Ooooo Please do write more! It's so rare to see people enter this pairing and stick with it! I really look forward to the rest of the story! :D
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  • From Ovelkara on March 25, 2010
    very interesting i look forward to see what happens next ^_^
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  • From iononhapaura on March 24, 2010
    I love the story so far can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon
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