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Reviews for Ritual Seduction

By : SarahRae
  • From dragongirl on May 07, 2010
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
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  • From ANON - Martha on April 29, 2010
    Awwww such a twist. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From blondpierogi on April 28, 2010
    ooh my... what is going on??
    Did Lucius meddle in this somehow?.. did he force the vision of Hermione as his mate? or did Hermione convince Lucius to have her be the mate?? interesting..I hope that all will be ok!!!
    Cannot wait to read more!
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  • From TammaraG on April 28, 2010
    Great story, love the twist that is Lucius, can't wait to see what he has done and how they fates get even
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  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on April 28, 2010
    WTF? What did Lucius do? Because from everything you've written so far it's him that's up to something, and he's got the house elf helping him. Draco has no idea what's going on and I doubt Hermione does etiher. They shared each others memories and felt each others feelings. Is there magic that makes you feel false feelings, I think in canon that couldn't be done.

    So I've come to the conclusion that Lucius has done something (no idea what) to Hermione that would make her more receptive to mating with Draco. It could have something to do with the calming draught he was thinking of at the start of the chapter. This meddling is why the fates want to see Lucius.

    I am really curious as to why Snape is fates bitch.

    Please don't make us wait too long :)
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  • From smmz79 on April 28, 2010
    OMG what is going on???? so did lucius tamper with hermione so that she would accept draco easier than she would have originally??? great chap
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  • From dragongirl on April 27, 2010
    Sorry to say this but this Fates do not know very well Hermione, when she give her heart she gave it with or without a potion ........ LOL
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  • From dracoschick007 on April 27, 2010
    Oooo.....interesting! LOVE IT!!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 24, 2010
    Simply lovely and sweet. Thank you. I seem to have missed the "issue" though. Can't wait to find out what it is. lol HG4eva
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  • From ANON - C issi418 on April 24, 2010
    Beautifully written descriptive story has me fascinated. Thank you very much for your efforts. Cannot wait for it's completion.
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  • From dragongirl on April 24, 2010
    Beautiful!!!!!!!!! And sooooooooooooooo romantic........
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  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on April 24, 2010
    Oh that was sweet. Obviously Hermione's never had a decent lover before if she reacts that way to oral sex. I liked the way you had Draco transform and that he has Hermione's inital on him. They have really come along well. I hope we get to see more of the Dragon from a few chapters ago. I thought he was cute.

    Looking forward to the next installment. You will let us know what the thing is that one of your reviewers has picked up on? You've fired up my curiosity. And sometimes I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed.
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  • From ANON - smurphy on April 24, 2010
    wow that was a lovely chap.... his true form sounds beautiful!!!! I love the names theyhave for each other... so why do i have a feeling that their bonding is not complete yet??? hmmm and i have a question i wonder what severus looks like in his form and i wonder who his mate is??? great chap
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on April 23, 2010
    I love this story line! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 23, 2010
    Me likey :) I like the way you told a little of what happened during their mind meld thing. Looking forward to reading the next installment.
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