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Reviews for Ritual Seduction

By : SarahRae
  • From lemonade8 on April 22, 2010
    Well, he wanted her, he got her with no sort of conflict at all. No problems, no obstacles to overcome. No triumphs. As far as fluff goes... it's defintiely there. This is one of the smoothest wooings I've read in a while.
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  • From dragongirl on April 22, 2010
    THEY ARE SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on April 22, 2010
    Yaahhh I was watching for your update everyday!!!! I cannot wait for the next chap:-) and I loved this one
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  • From dragongirl on April 18, 2010
    This is so refreshing....... different ritual and tests............ Lovely!
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  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on April 18, 2010
    That was a beautiful chapter. I liked your Dragon, he sounds viciously terrifying and wonderfully sweet at the same time. Loved him turning around to give them privacy, it made me giggle. I am curious what their reactions will be to the sharing of memories. Does that mean they only have their bodies left to share?

    Looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - smurphy on April 18, 2010
    oh wow this ritual sounds really interesting... i wonder what they are going to be like towards each other after the ritual... i like the way that you wrote this bc a lot of mate fics have them connected by their minds but it is assumed that they understand each others struggles i love that you have actually written a ritual in here that makes them face each others demons... oh and i love dracos guardian very fitting...i think that will definitely help them to understand each other... i soo cannot wait for the next chap:-)
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  • From luannfeld on April 18, 2010
    So, now, what? I forgot what day it was when they started the bond. What did they share during it? What are their thoughts/feelings now that it's Thurs. afternoon?
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  • From luannfeld on April 18, 2010
    Very sweet, I can't stop reading it (even though you really do need a beta to help with spelling/grammar). Very romantic.
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on April 16, 2010
    Well that was a hot little interlude!!!!! Loved this chap and it was great to read them become comfortable with each other esp more intimately!!!! I soooo cannot wait for the next challenge!!! Wonderful job!!!
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  • From on April 15, 2010
    I've had a crap day, so thanks for making me smile (and melt a little)!
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 15, 2010
    I can't remember if I have been reviewing. Being ill and on lovely drugs, tends to make me dopier than normal. Anyway. YAY me likey muchy. Wonderful story with great characterisation. Looking forward to reading more.

    It's a soppy, sweet, awww so cute like puppies and kittens type of story. The sort I love to read and attempt to write. The few errors I've noticed haven't detracted from the overall enjoyment of the story. If you haven't already got a Beta I would suggest finding one. They are great at picking up the little errors that us authors can easily overlook.

    Really enjoyed the mutual masturbation scene. It was written so sweetly without being crude and just 'I wanna fuck'. I find writing sex scenes incredibly difficult without it sounding like porn or really stupid.

    Keep writing, I'll keep reading :D
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  • From dragongirl on April 14, 2010
    If you have error I miss them all ..... LOL This was too cute to pass ......... LOL
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 14, 2010
    I want a birthday present like that! lol Thanks, hon. This continues to be fun! HG4eva
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  • From redneckpassion on April 14, 2010
    I gotta let you know I smile every time I see that you have updated this. :) I am quite enjoying reading it, and the last chapter (6)? Delicious.
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  • From ANON - smurphy on April 14, 2010
    yaaahhhh they kissed!!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoo.... ok so two more trials left and the mind one sounds like it may be tough... i love this story and i LOVE that you update so frequent i look forward to reading the next chap every other day.... thank you!!!!!
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