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Reviews for A Christmas Carol

By : ronsmistress
  • From Shellnet on March 20, 2019

    Great story but you should  have gone a little further maybe him telling about his kids on the way but i like that seen maybe point out him not going to get that ingradiant but going on his honeymoon just a little something but that would be a good sequel


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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 25, 2010
    That was a fun and sweet take on an old story. Thank you for freshening it up for me. :-) Please write another story again soon, okay? Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From Sampdoria on June 20, 2010
    Brillint version of a great plot, I liked that you had Severus parents alive and that he aknowlegded the friendship he had from the other Professors, very well done.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 17, 2010
    I seem to have missed the last 3 updates, so I was thrilled to see them today! Thank you for such a sweet story. Winter, spring, summer or fall, this story rocks! More soon please, HG4eva
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  • From use2b2t2 on May 17, 2010
    Yea! Another chapter! I look forward to the next when. I am enjoying your prose.

    Mare
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  • From bloodyblond on May 08, 2010
    I'm so glad you decided to revisit the Severus/Hermione pairing. I love the way you write him, and this is truly one of your best stories yet. It's very polished, has great flow and really shows how you've grown as an author. Look forward to more.
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  • From nonentity on May 02, 2010
    This is such a change from your usual stories. The plot movement is tighter, probably due to the three ghosts structure. So far, I think this is your best story. The last part is going to be hard to do--trying not to get too sappy while not dragging it out too much or making it unfulfilling.
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  • From voraciousreader on May 01, 2010
    Very poignant and about the only way he would be able to see his own impact on the lives around him. After all, he spent most of his life in a guilty search for veangeance as well as the isolation needed to focus on his task.
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  • From voraciousreader on April 27, 2010
    I do like your refreshing analysis of Ron's potential for love. Of course you didn't have the ghost mention the insecurities, but Snape covered those, so I guess it's ok. You're about the only author I know that actually has taken the time (myself included) to really go in depth with Ron and bring out aspects the rest of us tend to ignore. Ron tends to be used mostly as a foil or merely as a trigger for plot devices, but I think you develope his character more then JK did.
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  • From use2b2t2 on April 27, 2010
    I like this story a lot. It is keeping within both the original story and representing the influence of the HP Caeactors. I can't wait for the next update

    Mare
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 27, 2010
    I couldn't yell at you; this is too cute to do that to you. lol I am really enjoying and you are doing it well. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From nonentity on April 17, 2010
    just read the first chapter--I like the idea behind the chains (never read the original Christmas Carol) and the pranks on Potter and Black.
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  • From voraciousreader on April 14, 2010
    Yeah, well, sometime we do need to be slapped in the head with a bat before we can actually face what we know, Sev. Good character analysis.
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  • From chcewiedziec on April 14, 2010
    It starts interesting. Snape is canon, which is very good indeed. It's also well written and minor mistakes aren't very annoying. I only hope we won't have to wait long to read more. All the best!
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  • From BillsBedroom on April 13, 2010
    Okay, this starting out to be a cute version (not that I would EVER call Snape cute, I would get hexed!!) I am looking forward to next chapter.
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