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Reviews for How Things Change

By : BellaDonnaPrincess
  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on May 05, 2010
    Cool another chapter. I got a little confused about the whole who wanted what job thing, perhaps you could expand on that in later chapters. The fact that Hermione and Ginny are seen as nothing more than sidekicks is another topic you could have heaps of fun with. Nice to see Hermione still has her hand in working order. Loved the way Draco kissed her after the first hit.

    One incorrect spelling leapt out at me, you used their instead of they're (sorry can't remember what sentence.)

    Looking forward to your next update :)
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  • From dragongirl on May 04, 2010
    Hermione doesn't have any idea of how to have fun does she? OH well my dragon comes to the rescue and show her.He is so cute.
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 23, 2010
    I knew before I even started reading who you had set Hermione up with. Are you sharing my brain or something?

    Gee Ron's a bit thick isn't he? And oh my, not telling Molly and then trying to get Ginny not to tell Molly about Luna? Harry's almost as thick as Ron. No I think it's more selfishness. Who was at the Potter wedding if he didn't tell the Weasleys? Actually Harry's behaviour towards Ginny has shown no sympathy or compassion over what he's done. He broke a promise, broke her heart and then expects her to be all forgiving about it. I love the way you've made both him and Ron a bit on the emotionally retarded side. I wonder if Luna was aware of their promise, since it always appeared to me that Ginny and Luna were friends.

    Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on April 21, 2010
    Yup it's me again. Okay gonna start the review with a criticsim, Ginny sent Hermione an "invoice" after Harry left. A better choice of word would be memo, message, phonecall, floocall. An invoice is a bill. Yeah kinda petty but for some reason it irritated the shit out of me.

    Now onto the good bit. You go girl! Tell that low down wanker of a boy who lived where to go. I liked how you had Ginny answer his question and then go hang on a minute and tell him off.

    I knew Ron would fuck up. Loved what you had Hermione do to him. LOL Is the shrinkage permanent?

    The chapter seemed a bit shorter than usual, or maybe that's just me. I was only disappointed there wasn't more to read.

    Oooh is the next chapter the date? Really curious as to whom Hermione is setting herself up with. I can only presume that Blaise will tell his 'single friend' who they will be going out with.

    Another nice idea would be a confrontation or conversation with the rest of the Weasley's about Hermione and Ron being kaput.

    Looking forward to reading more. I am a loyal reviewer :)
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 17, 2010
    I like your Ginny. The way she went off at Blaise and then apologised. And I like your Blaise too, very understanding. He seems to be very perceptive and intelligent. Really wanting to read more.

    Liked your portrayl of Hermione too. She's a loyal friend to Ginny, and honest which is something the little red head needs. Although I thought she would have been a bit angrier over Harry's actions. Something that just occurred to me, what is Ron's reaction to his best friend shafting his little sister? Did he even know that they had promised to wait for each other? What about the rest of the Weasleys? I can't see them taking an understanding view of their little girl being betrayed. (Not that Ginny's a girl, but to a large family she will always be their baby girl)

    Don't get worried about all my questions, it just means that I'm involved in what you're writing and speculating about what might happen next. You've got at least one reviewer panting for more :D
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  • From CrazyPedantic on April 15, 2010
    You evil little minx stopping it there. Gah! Obviously I want to read more.

    I feel really sorry for Ginny, I presume she had no contact whatsoever with the wizarding world. Harry should have either told her it was over (He could have gotten her address and mailed a muggle letter) or waited until she returned before getting it on with Luna like that.

    Loved your portrayl of Blaise. Looking forward to where this will go. Did Hermione have anyone waiting for her? (I can just imagine her coming back and Ron is married to Lavender) LOL I have a sick brain.

    Update soon please?
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