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By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From ANON - Samantha on April 28, 2010
    It's really good. I like this story a lot. Great job.
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  • From ANON - WordLover on April 28, 2010
    This is a very interesting story. It has much potential and I hope you continue it. Ha ha and yes, epiphanies are awesome ;)
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  • From jyanx on April 28, 2010
    An ephinpy can be a wonderful thing, and I agree it allows the writer to get to a feeling or an emotion without having to spend page and pages describing every little thing. It also seems to work well for me when a character finally realizes something that I've seen for ages (like the fact Ron and Hermonie are a complete mismatch). I like how your developing her friendships and I look forward to seeing where it develops from here. Sorry your having trouble getting reviews. It's a shame when really well written and interesting stuff isn't given the respect and recognition it deserves. Thanks, and I hope you don't lose heart.
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  • From ANON - Crazy Pedantic on April 28, 2010
    Okay first off my two criticisms. In chapter one you wrote Hermione was in the Three Broomsticks, but then Sirius waved Tom over. Tom's the Barkeep of the Leaky Cauldron, Rosmerta (if that's spelt right) is the barkeep of 3 Broomsticks. Secondly when Hermione was talking to Remus she said brake up with Ron where is should have been break.

    Apart from that cool. Me likey :) I guess Remus' true mate is Hermione? She does seem rather comfortable with him. I liked the fact you brought up Ginny seeing Hermione as a threat, it just shows that she's not as confident as she always puts across. Interesting to have Tonks and Shaklebolt together.

    Had an absolute giggle fest at the Sirius trying to convince Hermione to let him play matchmaker. Looking forward to the next one and hope you get more reviews.
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  • From ANON - Narcissas Sister on April 28, 2010
    I know you said this would only be 3 chapters but I think your cutting it short. This has a huge possibility to be much more. There could be some angst and drama within all the characters pasts alone. Of course you are the author and we must take what we can get (sigh). thanks for the quick update and well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - DragonflyRyder on April 28, 2010
    Great story so far. Cant wait for these 2 to get together.....an Sirius as a matchmaker.....rofl! cant wait for an update
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on April 28, 2010
    I'm loving your story! I love the Hermione/Remus pairing and you're writing it spot on. Thank you for the emotional baggage that they carry (Ron and Tonks)and I like the way they find comfort in each other after their crappy days. It's shaping up to be a great story; I only wish you hadn't said that it would be really short!

    PS: Sirius is just wonderful!
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  • From jyanx on April 26, 2010
    Fun story so far, and I see interesting thing happening. I really am enjoying it so far. Thank you.
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