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Reviews for The Pen of Destiny (COMPLETE!!)

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From apkblack on May 23, 2010
    Love the idea, Machiavelli's plume, to rewrite history. Looking forward to reading the rest, just had to interrupt to give props for the plot. Love it.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 23, 2010
    Morning After Dark by Timbaland. By the way, I loved the brownies...they really hit the spot.*licking crumbs off the plate* You have no idea how I have been craving them lately.(smacking lips together)I must say, though, that this story is not flowing as easily as others you have written. The chapters are not as long and I must say, not as fast paced as some of your other stories. This one seems to be giving you trouble. Kick its ass and get the words flowing again. I still like the plot line, but its slow right now. I love the relationship between Draco and Hermione. They seem to be comfortable together. More Hermione/Sirius getting serious please.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 19, 2010
    Pity the Child from Chess. Nice, I love a good challenge. I'd like Brownies this time, instead of cookies, if you don't mind. I am in need of a really big chocolate fix right now, thank you very much. On with the story, though, gotta love it when Hermione shows Sirius that she knows him better than he thinks she does.
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  • From Kayrox133 on May 18, 2010
    Okay I have to admit I don't know the musical piece but Detachable Penis is a hilarious song!!
    Let us not forget what else brought me here and that would be the beginning of another great story.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 18, 2010
    Thanks so much for writing this story; I am enjoying it very much! I like a bossy, straightforward Hermione and I feel for Sirius who's just had his shield well and truly pierced. :D

    And the song is Pity the Child from the musical Chess written by Benny and Bjorn from ABBA. When I was nine, I learned survival / Taught myself not to care / I was my single good companion / Taking my comfort there.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 15, 2010
    Detachable Penis by King Missile. Not my type of music but a good one to try to stump me...
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  • From chris7100 on May 15, 2010
    I do so loathe Molly. Your Hermione is, however, as wonderful and snarky as always. Had to google the review sing-a-long, so won't give it away. Haven't laughed so hard in days! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on May 13, 2010
    Money, by Pink Floyd. Come on meriteri, you can do better than that....anyway, more story, please, more story.
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  • From ANON - monddame on May 12, 2010
    Oops, still not signed in. Sigh, I'll get around to it one of these days.
    In other news, based on your hint, I'd imagine it's a Pink Floyd song, but I honestly don't know which one. Alas.
    Crazy cliffhanger! I thought it might be Sirius at first (sometimes I wish you could post without giving away the pairing but still attracting the right 'shippers', it so biases your reading knowing what the main pairing is!).
    Anyway, lovely. I wonder how Bill's curiousity is going to tie in to Hermione's search.
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  • From chris7100 on May 12, 2010
    Great new fic!!! Don't suppose I could convince you our mystery man should be a certain Black who'd been presumed dead, huh? And 'Money' is an excellent choice! Gotta love someone who can jump from Patsy Cline to Pink Floyd without batting an eye :)
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  • From ANON - monddame on May 10, 2010
    I believe that the song was sung by Patsy Cline. Such a classy lady. I think the title is 'Crazy', right? Or it could be that my brain is just melding that line into 'Crazy' and it is from a different song. Regardless of what it is, I know it's on my iPod. ;)

    So, I was bit wary of this 'plume' thing. A search for a magical object can turn into such a malarky, you know? But rewriting history? oh my. Lots of potential there. I'm interested to see where Sirius comes in though, since we haven't seen him yet. Anyway, good work so far. Keep it up!

    (P.S. apparently I'm not signed in. and I'm a bit too lazy to do it now. sorry. ;) )
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  • From kstargal on May 05, 2010
    ohh, I'm totally intrigued! Great dialogue, and I love she gets to work with Blaise! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and a bit of Sirius!!
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