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Reviews for Wolf in the Making

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - angelmuziq on June 01, 2010
    It would be interesting to see a confrontation between Harry and Lisa once she finds out that Draco wants Harry on a more permanant basis. I wonder if she'd get jealous and do something... unwise. Great chapter. Update soon!
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  • From NightLo on June 01, 2010
    Hum...if Harry cannot escape, how would he deal with his inner demons?
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  • From ANON - andreea on June 01, 2010
    You know, I'm wondering what happened to Malfoy's ties to England? What happened to his parents? I dont think Draco would completely abandon them, even in his quest for power.
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on June 01, 2010
    Ahh a corrupted Harry.. how delightful LOL. As for Dark Harry killing Ron and Hermione, it is overused and since I rather like the both of them then I guess they would have to turn Dark as well or simply not be in the story I guess. Or if it was an AU then Ron and Hermione could be of a like mind to a Dark Harry. I just think its different. Its always hero Harry to save the day, a goody two shoes(even though I do like him being a hero). It would be nice to see something unique once in a while thats radically different from the norm. He wouldnt have to be Evil per se, just kinda like Snape and or Draco(especially the Draco in this story)- more Slytherin perhaps. Anyway awesome chapter as usual. Its late otherwise I'd catch up on your other chapters but its something to look forward to tomorrow. Keep up the spectacular work!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on May 31, 2010
    I wonder who does the maintenance work at Fox Valley. I just can't see any handymen in the bunch.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on May 31, 2010
    i'm caught in limbo. i feel like there's been a power shift in draco's favor and i didn't expect it to come so soon. however, i don't think it's the significant one i think u're going to pull on us. i thank u for the surprise. it's fun having an author who can keep the reader on it's toes. i hate being able to easily predict an outcome. it makes the plot and significant moments less appealing. so thank you. til next time. keep up the suspense.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 31, 2010
    about #8....

    1. PLEASE tell me pants like those do not exist and you
    made them up.

    2. Draco smiled back at him, wondering if he had noticed that he had used
    the word
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  • From ANON - andrea on May 31, 2010
    loveing this story i adore draco
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  • From NightLo on May 29, 2010
    Just wondering when Draco confronts Harry with his darkness and his insane ways...how would Harry feel and defend himself? Thought I believe that would only fuel Draco's lust and desire more...
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  • From NightLo on May 28, 2010
    Let's review chapters 5 & 6 first...really Draco does play most of his cards, he seems to be in the lower hand...would he realize what he told later? BTW, now Harry realizes that it is lust and desire that drives Draco...would he change his plan?
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on May 28, 2010
    every time harry has to covince himself that he isn't attracted but acting makes me think he's lying to himself desperately. good job on the power play between the two. it still seems like harry has the upperhand because he seems to have pegged draco pretty well and draco seems to be clueless for the most part. am i wrong? also i have a feeling that in the last chapter of this segment harry is going to face a turning point that leans in dracos favor. maybe? anyways lurved this chapter. this is too much fun but it's a little agonizing in how slow any progress is being made. ur terribly evil at times. lol. ciao!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on May 28, 2010
    I think these two will tear each other apart. That sounds fun.
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  • From ANON - purple-er on May 28, 2010
    awesomeness.
    thank you for writing.
    *happy reader*

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  • From thrnbrooke on May 26, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 7!!! Will Draco find out about the spell?
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  • From ANON - polka dot on May 25, 2010
    Well if Draco's not gonna forget and Harry doesn't use the info. ASAP then Draco can just move the bracelets and add some more security.
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