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By : Lomonaaeren

From Nevermore11 on May 25, 2010
I have to say, this is one of my favorite stories that you've written. I very much enjoy the plot, and the characters are quite dynamic. You have such a gift with writing, and I wait in grand anticipation for the next chapter. Very nicely done.
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From ANON - SP777 on May 25, 2010
about #6...

1. He bent closer in and smelled the sour scent arising from Potter
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From mrequecky on May 25, 2010
Yippieh yay! Loved the chap and the smut :D
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From Claushiru on May 25, 2010
Oh Harry's so unsure of everything, trying to convince himself how he's doing his best to keep up with his escape plan, how he's NOT enjoying anything at all... I'll say as Harry's inner voice is saying : liar.

Will you eventually bring Ron and Hermione into this? Or are they forever doomed to be the distant lost best friends who owl once a year? Speaking of the future... I wonder how Robard is explaining the prolonged vacation Harry is having. Is Harry still supposed to be on vacation? Or has his time been up for a while, and he's been declared missing from the rest of the Wizarding world? Chaos! The Valley is closed off the world, but I can't imagine Draco NOT keeping up with what's going on outside.
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From ANON - angelmuziq on May 25, 2010
I agree that most of the Dark Harry stories arent really plausible and I guess thats why there arent many good ones out there. But if anyone could write one it would be you. Even the little bit I see here is better than most. I guess for one to work it'd have to be totally AU. A girl can dream. LOL Anyway another great chapter. This fic is turning out to be one of my favs.. tho most of your stories are. Cant wait for next chapter.
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From mrequecky on May 23, 2010
Loved :D
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From ANON - k lave demo on May 22, 2010
it seems as if harry has the advantage but there are subtle signs that he doesn't have the control he needs to get through this unscathed. however, if draco doesn't change his methods soon he may very well loose. i love that how there is no clear advantage it puts them closer to an egual footing. but the best part of this chapter was harry's willing step into darkness and that cool unaffected smile. i see my fangirl looming on the horizon. nothing like a good game of cat and mouse and hard to get with no clear roles to really make th blood boil. and it sings. i'm sorry got carried away. thanks for the reply. it makes sense knowing harry. til the next chapter. hitsuzen
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From thrnbrooke on May 22, 2010
Soooo need chapter 6!!!!
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From ANON - polka dot on May 22, 2010
somehow when neither one is particularly likable I have to like them more
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From Claushiru on May 22, 2010
My my, Draco does think with his dick way too much! Will his physical desire ever turn to love? I can see how Harry could yield and feel companionship towards Draco, but the Lord himself? I can't wait to learn what he will see of Harry to convince him he has to have an emotional attachment.. yay for chapter 5! =D
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From ANON - SP777 on May 22, 2010
about #5..

1. You know, I'm really curious to see how you end this.
Because a majority of your stories always end on a positive
note. I wonder if you're daring enough to show that not
every ending can be a happy one, especially when it's this
type of story.

'Cause if you think about it, I can't see Draco just giving
up so easily, even for Harry. I'm thinking the OK corral
on this one, guns or wands a'blazing.

2. I'm beginning to believe mirror magic is the connection
when it comes to these dreams.

3. You know what...I'm SERIOUSLY thinking you
should commit Draco to 'W.A.'....Wankaholics Anonymous.
Poh' Child seriously needs to get laid.

4. Personal question, I've always assumed you were female,
considering I am of the gentler sex [yeah right!], are you? I
meant to ask that a long time ago.
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From NightLo on May 22, 2010
Just wondering will other Marked ones question the motive and action of Harry...
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From thrnbrooke on May 21, 2010
Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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From ANON - angelmuziq on May 20, 2010
Another great chapter as always. I'm kinda liking Dark and Powerful Harry. I don't see too many well written fics with him featuring. I know you're busy but it would be the greatest thing ever if you could write a Harry/Draco fic with Dark Powerful Harry like how he is in Draco's dream and have Dark Draco desire him and they take over the wizarding world or something like that because that would be hot! LOL and with you writing it, it would be well written hotness! Just a thought. Update as soon as you can cuz I can't wait to see what happens next. Love it!
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From ANON - SP777 on May 20, 2010
about #4....

I don't know what it is about this story, but it has a
certain.. I don't know..forbidden atmoshpere?
Very tense...I sometimes notice you do stories like
that but not often.

2. Is it just me, but have you seen the movie, Hellboy 2???
It's just the fighting style brought that to mind.

There was something else I wanted to ask, but...gotta go
to work. Maybe it'll hit me later.
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