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Reviews for Wolf in the Making

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - k lave demo on May 19, 2010
    kyaa! i love this story about as much if not more than the first. the mix of emotions and desires as well as the misconspetions make this so much fun to read. there is a small part that can't wait for the result but for the most part i'm enjoying the journey to much. i agree with draco that this version of harry is very appealing minus the unecessary guilt. i think that thinking has been completely ingrained in him and ron and hermione weren't there to curb it. would i be correct in assuming that harry's guilt may be a method to keep his darker side from taking over. maybe a punishment to keep himself in check. sorry i've been gone so long. have u ever considered writing a book? ttyl!
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  • From Claushiru on May 19, 2010
    Ah! And now there is a challenge for Draco. Splendid! I wonder how he will succeed though ; having a willing Harry by his side after enslaving him against his will? That's going to be veeery hard.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on May 19, 2010
    I'm disappointed that no one is even looking for Harry. I would think someone would have missed him by now.
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  • From NightLo on May 16, 2010
    Actually does Harry realize the unmistable attraction towards Draco? And when Draco's attraction, desire and feelings for Harry grow more, can he satisfy himself with having Harry because of his own Mark, but not of Harry's will and feelings in return? Does Draco trust others enought to have companiorship rather than control over people?
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  • From mrequecky on May 16, 2010
    Yay, totally looking forward to whatever you bring on :D
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  • From Claushiru on May 15, 2010
    Hmm.. I really love this sequel so far, but isn't it a bit too one-sided? Harry seems to be the only one to truely struggle and change. All Draco has to do is let himself be guided by his assumptions of Harry, without ever knowing he had been wrong when his assumptions slowly turn to facts, when Harry himself changes to suit his perception. At least that's what I'm getting/guessing from the way Harry plays his role for Draco and how confused he gets at times. Shouldn't Draco change too? Shouldn't he face some sort of struggle instead of always believing he'll have the upper hand in the end and not caring one bit about anything? I just can't empathize with Draco's persona in this fic ; he's like a God or an unchanging variable Harry has to cope with when he is, in fact, quite human and complex.
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  • From ANON - purple-er on May 15, 2010
    Loved the latest chapter! can't wait to find out what happens next, either harry's gonna get caught in his plan, or he's gonna escape and then.... hmmm, well im gonna leave the twists to you,
    keep writing awesome stuff XD
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  • From ANON - andrea on May 15, 2010
    Love this story
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 15, 2010
    about #3...

    You gotta admit, Thalia IS honest about certain
    situations. But, I kind of wonder about her
    sometimes, if she has hidden intentions.

    I have to say I enjoyed the little dance Harry
    has engaged in with Draco, but he better be careful
    or he'll wind up falling into Draco's 'spell', so
    to speak.

    and

    FINALLY, we get a duel from you! I was wondering if
    you'd ever do a scene with one again. I enjoy a duel
    between them as much as seeing them duel together.
    Though it was short...is writing a duel hard for you?
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 15, 2010
    Forgot about that idiot! Chapter 4 please!!!
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  • From NightLo on May 13, 2010
    Would Draco different treatment on Harry cause jealousy?
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  • From NightLo on May 12, 2010
    Just wondering...is Harry sure about his plan? He is not another one that holds too high beliefs?
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  • From mrequecky on May 12, 2010
    Hm, true, Harry's lured, too... I wonder if either of them will really 'win' :D
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 11, 2010
    about #2...

    WHAT THE HELL!!!???!!! How did you sneak not one but TWO
    chapters by me??? After all the time I had haras...uhh..
    ASKED about when you would post this. *sigh* Damn, I
    must be slipping.

    ANYway, I love the 'tit-for-tat' and game of tag you have
    the both of them playing, it's almost like foreplay. :-)

    By the way, I honestly LOVE a handsome & dangerous Harry,
    well it gets MY blood going, don't know about you. :-p

    Say, did you ever go to deviantart. com to see the pictures
    your stories have inspired? I know of one artist who did a
    picture based on your story 'Building with Worn Out Tools'.

    It's a question of what do you type in the search engine, so
    you won't have to go through 50+ pages of....Draco Malfoy
    actually. If you type in 'Harry Potter' I don't know if
    you'll come across it. Anyway, just thought I'd mention it.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on May 11, 2010
    I can't see them every getting together in a non-con sorta a way. Draco is a big a-h0le in this one.
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