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Reviews for The Kill Shot

By : Lizski
  • From Rumpelyssa on June 04, 2016
    YIKES GIRL YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE! THAT LAST CHAPTER WAS TOO DAMNED HOT FOR WORDS!!! You literally got me fanning my top over my body as an attempt to keep cool my own pool of warmth!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2015
    Stopped reading after chapter 11. Continue reading if you want to see how the auther ruined the whole story.
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  • From ANON - Brandy on September 17, 2015
    I am loving this story so much! I love all the references to the classics and are exactly how I picture Lucius to be! I actually laughed out loud thinking of him as Khan (fellow trekkie!). The pissing match between him and Severus is wonderful. You are an amazing writer! Can't wait to see what happens next :D
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  • From ANON - BellaPrincipessa on May 11, 2015
    I am really intrigued by this story. You certainly caught my attention with the concept of Lucius killing Voldemort and Draco being one step up from Frank and Alice Longbottom. I hope you'll continue this story!
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  • From Trelweny on May 11, 2015
    As much as I like Hermione/Severus pairings, and love seeing Severus happy, this Severus' reasons for wanting her and his ways of going about show they're not well suited in this case. Although, his notions of courting through potions sounds much more advantageous for him than his previous attempts.
    Please, see that he's happy some other way?

    Wow. Lucius really did let himself spin into a downward spiral fast. In ways I can understand... but at least he's out of Azkaban in his familiar home, Draco's ALIVE, Hermione's ALIVE, and Hermione is not indifferent to him. With those in his favor once he stops Wallowing at least he has positives to work with towards the goal he has chosen. So much harder with no goal and no assets... Or a goal based on something potentially pure fantasy. At least his home and Draco and Hermione are all very, very real and very, very THERE -even if not currently in the capacity of perfection he would prefer.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - SickSadGirl on May 11, 2015
    I wish the format was different so i could read it on my phone
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  • From ANON - Heaven on June 24, 2014
    I like your story though I am quite annoyed with Snape. :-D I hope you post more soon.
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  • From ANON - Heaven on June 24, 2014
    Snape is being a presumptious asshole. And how dare he talk to her the way he did? He is only a guest in her home after all, and she doesn't owe him explanation.
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  • From Trelweny on June 23, 2014
    I don't want to see Severus hurt... but he IS being a bit of a jerk. Although I love Wagner I've never attempted to sit through one in its entirety in public. I'm not even sure if our opera series Offers full Wagners; I don't think our rather lazy singers could Perform that long. ;)

    Looking forward to seeing more interactions with Draco in the future. Cute, sweet, child-minded Draco is rather adorable. I also am curious if we'll ever discover who wiped his mind.

    You know... I don't think Lucius can help but be a little Slytherin even in his truthfulness. If he weren't... perhaps Hermione would understand the lengths to which he wants her and wouldn't be confused about his references to how much she wants of them.

    Even years apart... thanks so much for writing and not giving up on your stories.
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  • From lillyput93 on January 30, 2012
    This is a REALLY good story!!! My only complaint is that Lucius seems to act like a boy at times but that is part of his charm, I think.
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  • From meltin2me on September 19, 2011
    Oh I don't know who to root for!! I want her to have them both! Is that an option? hint hint ;)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 18, 2011
    I think this is a fantastic story. I think Hermione has an impossible choice to make. I think you need to update again very soon! :-) Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From luciussmistress on July 10, 2011
    ARRRRGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!! I'm totally addicted!!! Ohhhhhh I don't think I can take waiting to find out where this is all leading!!!! Please please update soon!!! I fear I may literally keel over if there isn't more very soon!! *swoons slightly* :P you are amazing I beg you to find it in your heart to take pity on me and those like me and post another deliciously erotic and delectably tense chapter soon!!

    Begging on my knees!

    Luciussmistress
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  • From winter748 on June 12, 2011
    This story continues to fascinate me. I like the slower pace in developing their relationships and wonder what Severus is really wanting. I have a feeling Hermione's going to have a difficult but tasty task ahead. Glad to hear your spouse is better. Thanks.
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  • From mageemi on June 04, 2011
    Wow! I just discovered this story and so far I like it very much. Your characterizations of both Lucius and Hermione are great and I like the slow build up of their relationship. This addition of Snape to the story is interesting and I'm not entirely sure I like him here (although SS/HG is normally my OTP, I have developed a growing fondness for LM/HG as well). Can't wait to read more, hope to see the next chapter soon. :)
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