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Reviews for The Kill Shot

By : Lizski
  • From savigar on February 06, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this story. Looks like Hermione's going to have an interesting time trying to keep the upper hand with Lucius. Especially since it's sounding as though she might not mind having a hand or two ON him, as well. And who could blame her?
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  • From RedsAttic on December 09, 2010
    EXCELLENT!!!!!

    I look forward to reading future chapters.....
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  • From savigar on November 21, 2010
    Yum! Great story; i'll wait as patiently as i'm able to see what happens next.
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  • From AlyssiaBlack on November 16, 2010
    more more more! love this story ;)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 03, 2010
    This story's slow build is fantastic, so far! I love mystery of not knowing why/if he did kill Voldemort, as well as the pull of the two of them. Lucius' interest mingled with Hermione's acknowledgment of his assets...yum! I look forward to more soon! Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From voraciousreader on July 03, 2010
    Dobby makes a very effective duenna, I must say. I'm sure Lucius remembers being blasted down the stairs at Hogwarts, so he shouldn't put up much fuss, not if he wants to stay in one piece, that is, (smirk). She may have the house, but he's still got his vaults so a little wheeling and dealing should make his life a bit easier. Perhaps Hermione should charge him rent to ease her financial woes? Since she spent all her money on Draco's care, I would say he owes her, big time. Loved her telling him to be nice to the elves.
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  • From voraciousreader on June 08, 2010
    Congrtulations on writing your first novel! Just a note, the crinoline is not a regency fashion, it didn't emerge until the mid-19th century and Regency is 1790 to 1814. Now who's a nerd ;)? I like the way you are setting up their future relationship: Hermione will end up isolating ehrself if she pursues this course, Lucius will owe her for arranging for Draco's care, and she will owe him for his help. Looking very good!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 08, 2010
    I really am enjoying this story, so far, so I am glad to know you aren't leaving it unfinished. I look forward to seeing you make them more friendly with one another. :-) And, best of luck on your real story! HG4eva
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  • From surfmistress on June 08, 2010
    Wow, what a chapter! So many lovely twists and turns...and now Hermione owns Malfoy Manor and all it's contents. If Lucius was only pretending madness and 'cursing her with his last breath', what's he going to do when he finds out about this, lol. (I think you're right ~ it's terribly in character for him to quote those lines from Melville.)

    My heart went out to him finding out Draco was so severely spell-damaged. I don't think Hermione had any idea that he'd never heard about it before then; it wouldn't be like her to intentionally cause anyone that much anguish. Perhaps the fact of why she truly bought the manor will soften the blow a little for Lucius when he does learn of it.
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  • From voraciousreader on May 27, 2010
    Don't sweat the latin--I went to catholic school and generally use a online translator, myself. this is interesting, and I like having Dobby back. Having her monitor Lucius is a good way to get him out, but why would he talk to her? I will wait and see what you do with it, I guess.
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  • From surfmistress on May 27, 2010
    Bless Kingsley for his forward thinking! He's making it almost easy for Hermione to not only get to see Lucius and talk to him, but possibly be alone with him long-term in the Manor. Of course, I doubt Lucius will make it easy by cooperating with her, at least not for a while.

    Why do I get the impression for at lest a brief moment Hermione considered buying the Manor and freeing all the elves, lol.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 27, 2010
    This is a very interesting and intriguing story. I look forward to more soon. Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From surfmistress on May 16, 2010
    So glad to see you've started a new story - and such an interesting beginning it is!

    Surely Hermione wasn't truly the only person to notice two killing curses being shot at old Voldie. Ron, as usual, seems to be in a hurry to shut her up about the possibility that anyone but Harry could have had a hand in the final blow. Wonder why that is, hmmmm? Is there the slightest possibility he also saw something but didn't quite understand what happened? He never seems willing to give anyone but Harry the benefit of the doubt in anything and he alsways struck me as one who holds a grudge no matter what proof there is to the contrary.

    So sad about Draco. Hopefully, somewhere along the line Hermione will discover a way to help him, as well as prove Lucius had turned against Voldemort at the end.

    So glad you spared Severus, Remus and Dobby. At least *someone* is giving them the respect they deserve ;)
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  • From chays020 on May 14, 2010
    Very cool premise. It makes sense that the Wizarding world would want that tidy ending, and even more sense that Hermione wouldn't accept anything but the whole truth. Really anxious to find out how much Ron knows (I loathe him, so I'm just going to assume that everything bad that happens is his fault!); he certainly shuffled the mediwitches out of Hermione's room quickly, as if he knew what she was going to say...
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  • From voraciousreader on May 13, 2010
    a very tense scenario and a VERY nasty cliffie. I wait eagerly for your next post.
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