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Reviews for Wizarding Genetics

By : bottlepop1991
  • From ANON - ironiclaugh on May 20, 2010
    I didn't find your dialogues boring at all, to be honest I didn't even notice that there was a lot of it until you point it. In other words, I believe you are doing a good job in keeping things fluid and interesting. However, you may want to expand things a bit by maybe describing a bit more of the surroundings, movements feelings, etc. But only if you feel comfortable doing it, I like how your are doing it so far and I'm for sure intrigued by the plot!! :-)
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  • From on May 19, 2010
    You've had me at hello... But seriously, this is an amazing story, that I'm desperately hooked on and cannot wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Vidori on May 19, 2010
    Thanks for the update! My only critique would be that you could use more descriptors, like your story not being wholly, or mostly, comprised of dialogue. Other than that, I'm still very interested in seeing where this goes. Please keep up the work!
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  • From worriorbookwyrm on May 18, 2010
    wow and i don't think you made harry o.c. yet anyway no one knows what harry was like right after the final batle and i always disregraurd the epiloge anyway, i really like the way this story is headed so please write more thanks
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  • From ANON - HazelWolf on May 18, 2010
    You're only a chapter in, and I already find it unbelievably hot. I can only hope that this is heading where it seems to be; I ADORE a strong, dominant Harry. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Love it; update again soon!

    ~Hazel
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  • From ANON - Shadow on May 17, 2010
    Wow. Very good. I love it already!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 17, 2010
    Chapter 2 please!!!!!
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  • From Vidori on May 17, 2010
    Omg, I'm loving it already! I cannot wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Meia on May 17, 2010
    Well hello!

    You story seems promising. I hope to read another chapter soon, I'm pretty sure it's gonna be interesting.Have a good day!

    Meia
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