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Reviews for Year One: Ties of Destiny

By : ForgetfulLove
  • From ANON - SL on December 16, 2012
    Intriguing and refreshing premise. I wish you would continue to write it!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on October 17, 2011
    I've really enjoyed reading this story so far... I think the twists that you have created are facsinating. Please continue.

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2010
    Jbails,

    This is ADULT because you must be 18 or over. Sex is NOT required to be in any story added to this archive. Ever.
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  • From mrequecky on May 25, 2010
    I like this story, very much. However, you should look out for the tenses you are using, you are mixing up Past and Present tenses sometimes. Maybe a beta would be cool?
    Really like the story! Will keep reading ;D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 24, 2010
    Yup still like this. Loving the way you've twisted it up. Don't worry about the no sex, to me this site is about adults writing and reading fiction, it doesn't have to mean adult content. I like your story. I loved to hate your arrogant Harry. Would love to see how Snape reacts to Harry and Neville since he's now a Slytherin. McGonagall too for that matter. Pansy's a bit of a bitch, seems like Hermione's gonna have a real rough time of it.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2010
    I like, please continue. It's definitely different. I am curious to see how Harry's parents living have helped mould him. I'll definitely read more.

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