Reviews for Desperate Times, Desperate MeasuresBy : Daye |
Very unhappy that you wrote a story with no intention of finishing. This is why I have started not reading stories till completed. All 3 stories I'm writting have a start, a middle, & a finish. Just filling in the interactions of the characters.
Killing Ron still seems like a good idea!
So she loves him or at least cares for him a lot; but is in denial, so busting his love for her!
A Fantastic chapter, showing emotions & understanding, of Teenage emotion & barely past teenage! A must read for Tonks & Harry lovers!
OK much better to my thinking. Yes prior was needed for story (just as mine will have sections I hate.) But the way you have Tonks/Harry connect now was perfect!
Fast paced; Harry is a Black. Loved the I don't want to of Tonks & Harry!
Loving it. I like how it isn't all Unicorns and Roses for them both. Make it seem more tangible.
Keep p the awesome writing :-)
Thank you for taking the time to write and publish this. I really enjoyed it and the way you stayed true to the cannon. The naughty bits were very well done.
Regards,
Chris
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