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Reviews for Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

By : Daye
  • From ANON - just name on July 05, 2010
    That was certainly a new way of handling that same old plot, but you did it rather good and made it entertaining to read.
    You could have developed the plot before turning their relationship into something and make it more interesting. I guess I mean it felt like you rushed the transaction just for the sake of fitting one more smut scene before the next chapter.
    Anyways, good work so far and looking forward to an update!
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  • From MDB021Boo on June 28, 2010
    Cant wait to see the fallout of their mid-day sex romp.
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  • From ANON - DHSucks on June 26, 2010
    Just came across this story. I like how you characterized Tonks here.
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  • From ANON - Bob on June 11, 2010
    A nice chapter
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  • From SalonKitty on June 11, 2010
    Argh!! Petunia, you bitch!

    Lol, I noticed Tonks forgot to put up a Silencing spell, so I was starting to wonder just how loud they were getting. You certainly made sure we didn't forget where they were!

    I loved this chapter, Daye. I loved that Harry went to the trouble of cooking for her, and his reaction to her tardiness was right on cue. I could so see him acting that way while still struggling to work out a bit of maturity in his head. I loved his thoughts and insight into how Tonks would be feeling with everything she's gone through so far and how he adjusts to make things better for her. This Harry is just adorable and perfectly thoughtful, in every way.

    The sex, good Lord, the sex! Wonderful job, just lovely and sensual and true. You could feel Harry's amazement as he learns how to give a woman an orgasm for the first time ever, and having her Metamorphmagus abilities kick in just then was a great detail. It made her climax all the more palpable and generous.

    The way that Harry and Tonks have been talking to each other is so dead on, too. All of Harry's apologies are so in keeping with his natural tendencies to believe he's the fuck-up, and I love that he now has Tonks to assure him that he's good, better than good, and that he is deserving of love and intimacy. They're lovely together.
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  • From MayorHaggar on June 07, 2010
    That was an excellent chapter. We already have a very good idea of Harry's usual misery when at Privet Drive, so the only thing you really needed to show us in that respect was how Tonks was dealing with it all, and her interactions with Vernon and Harry did that quite well. The ending scene with Harry and Tonks was great stuff. I know that, posting here on AFF, I feel compelled to try and work a smut scene into each chapter I write. But in this case, I think smut would have been out of place. That scene stood alone, and deservedly so.
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  • From ANON - Bob on June 06, 2010
    A great new chapter, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - ares88 on June 05, 2010
    This is was so... warm. It made me feel so warm. Thanks for that. Really good chapter. You really know how to write these 'fluffy' things that i like. It really made the chapter when Harry and Tonks finally made up. And you didnt force a lemon in it was a plus. Sex is good but now would've been a wrong moment. May i suggest that in enxt chapter you write some 'article' tonks will read from Prophet. im really excited to wait and see the reaction of the wizarding world when the word gets out.

    See you soon.
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  • From SirZic000 on June 05, 2010
    great chapter!
    Continue,
    Z.
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  • From SalonKitty on June 04, 2010
    Oh, I loved that chapter! It was a perfectly realistic reaction on both their parts, but I'm so glad that Hermione had the good sense to mail Harry a mobile! Yay, that she talked some sense into him and it worked.

    You should be proud of the last section. I thought the heart-to-heart between Tonks and Harry as she held on to him was so tender and touching and just full of win. Poor Harry. I'm glad Tonks is softening up to him now that she realizes he's taken on the guilt for everyone. She could be a very good force in his life.

    And Tonks' smart-ass answers to Vernon were awesome. Really looking forward to the next installment. Excellent job, Daye.
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  • From ANON - hpf2114 on June 04, 2010
    I like this. There is never enough writing about Tonks. And the fun you can have with a woman who can turn into anyone. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From SalonKitty on June 01, 2010
    It might have been awkward for all involved, but realistic, which gives the story more bite. You did a great job of keeping them so in character throughout the proceedings. I feel really bad for both Tonks and Harry, at this point, but I liked how you connected them by their
    dutiful traits. Tonks expressing that they were both good little soldiers in Dumbledore's army seemed to capture their roles, perfectly, which adds a nice bit of irony seeing as both Harry and Tonks have a bit of a rebellious side to them.

    So curious to see how you roll things out at the Durselys next. Wonder what will happen when its time for Harry to go back to school? Is Tonks going to stay with him there, too, or go back to her place?

    Write like the wind, my friend.
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  • From ANON - ares88 on June 01, 2010
    i wonder how it goes from here. I bet there will be lots of ups and downs to go around. And how the society will react when their 'hero' and 'chosen one' suddenly gets married. And hogwarts? Will this be another of those fics where they get their own private room where they will be 'lovey-dovey' togehter? Part of me wishes it wont. That kind of fluff really wont work unless there are lots of lemon to go around.

    Whatever you decide, i will wait for the next chapter. See you later.
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  • From MayorHaggar on May 31, 2010
    Not quite what I was expecting from the wedding, but I think I like your take better. Tonks was kinda hard on Harry, but it's completely understandable for her to be rather moody and inconsiderate given the circumstances. I look forward to seeing how they deal with the awkwardness. It'll probably take a bit for them to warm up to each other, but I'd think spending so much time in the stifling confines of Privet Drive will help them overcome that eventually. Can't wait to read the rest.
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  • From ANON - bob on May 31, 2010
    An intresting and realistic take on forced Hary/Tonks Marriage. Keep it up.
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