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Reviews for The Journey Cycle Pt 2: New Zealand (pt 2 complete

By : squigglesquared
  • From snapeinmybed on July 22, 2010
    Aurghhh, LOVE IT!! As always, your writing is fantastic! Bring on Book 3! I'm hooked, can't wait to find out what's next in the crazy adventures of Harry and Sev.
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  • From stepmnstr on July 22, 2010
    wonderful stories!!!! i truely enjoy seeing and adult severus and harry
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  • From bellathedark on July 18, 2010
    OMG WOW! I was completely blown away with the ending of part II. I was stunned. I must say I'm still enjoying reading something with adult povs and experiences; a thing that is becoming rare-er and rare-er in the Snarry end of fandom, dispite the fact that most Snarry fen are on the older end of the scale. I adore the joy that Severus and Harry find in one another and skills that they practice in keeping their relationship strong. I'm sad to see the end of Hermione and Nev's life together, but stagnation is a harsh trap to fall into in a relationship, along with tying someone down in a roll they do not want nor are they very comfortable in. I'm sad that she felt that she had no support nor anyone to fall back on; but the reality is, like Severus said, too many women find themselves in a similar position with no-one to help or support them, and too many are willing to judge them.

    I can't wait to see what happens next, esp. with the new plot twist you've thrown in.

    I do have one concrit but I'll not voice it in public ... if you are curious email me at bellathedark at gmail dot com.

    Again I'm really enjoying this and I can't wait for more. I would love to see you post this on other archives to get a larger readership.
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  • From paganwoman on July 18, 2010
    Hey Squigs, loving the story. What I like the most about it is that you already established that it would be a long one and there is time enough to establish all of the story lines and characters and not have to rush through it just to end it, like it seems in some stories. The characters are developed and your story gives us a chance to get to know them and have "a relationship" with them. All in all, keep up the good work and take care of yourself. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From snapeinmybed on June 22, 2010
    As always, FANTASTIC! Poor Harry, to old to fight the forces of evil and darkness head on anymore. :D
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  • From bellathedark on June 17, 2010
    Heyla, I just finished reading part one and just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your work. The way you introduced the past relationships of both Harry and Severus was an inspiring seg-way into their new relationship, it also made a plausible explanation for the comfort they found in each other (the well known but little talked about grief/comfort sex). I liked the fact that they still thought about their past loves, all too often in fics once someone is gone
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  • From snapeinmybed on June 16, 2010
    Love this story! Cant wait for your next update and to see where Harry and Severus' journey through NZ and Australia take them. Keep up the great writing!
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