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By : SalonKitty
  • From Reddi on August 29, 2011
    i email you:). Great chapter! had the sex, drama,guilt, suspense,love, and passion all wrapped up in one. I was getting a little tired of re-reading the same thing allt he time. lol. Sorry your work makes for easy work ups for me. I don't know how anyone would not be able to read that and not get hot tot heir core!. will wait for the next chapter, and i hope it does not take as long as this one did. as for life, oh i know how that feels, and is, and yes u are allowed to have a block. Just wanted to say i missed you:)
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  • From newtothis on August 29, 2011
    great chapter, very hot, hermone wanting to please harry more then any one else. that intresting it does not have to be love becouse there are those you want to make proud of that your dont love. she putting her family in danger but you want to be control by harry. he dangerous he might go to far.

    would hermoinie subment to ron if he tried to take control.

    intresting ride a good one but intresting all the same.


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  • From Daye on August 29, 2011
    Now that's a decent cliffhanger. Ron calling an intervention has a lot of promise. Especially if Harry mistake's the reason why Ron wants to have a serious chat with him...

    Harry on the other hand, is being a total dick. Taking advantage of your friend's submissive tendencies to 'win' an argument is not going to solve anything at all.
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  • From WesleyY7 on August 08, 2011
    I'm getting caught up on this story (just finished chapter 5) and I read each chapter with bated breath. I'm a huge fan of Harry and Hermione's friendship, but never really like them romantically. It's so believable here. But you've made it work while at the same time making their connections to their respective spouses seem real. I've suffered from depression and I can totally empathize with so many of Hermione's dark thoughts. I am so addicted to this story, but I feel like I'm watching a car crash waiting to happen. Harry and Hermione are getting closer and closer and, since this is AFF, I'm willing to bet we'll get some more smut soon. However, I fear this will not end well for our heroes. And while I adore Hermione and Harry and feel for what they're both going through, I worry for Gin and Ron. When this hits the fan, they're going to be the ones played for the fools. I'm going to keep reading and I'll probably get mad when I reach the last chapter, so be sure to update soon! (Unless you're working on Girls & Boys, in which case, you're forgiven!)
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  • From MollysSister on July 31, 2011
    OUuuuu I really liked their chat about body jewlery! I want Hermione to be picerced but have no idea how she could explain that to Ron. Oh their rendezvous would be some much eaiser if they had a time turner! Make it so!
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  • From MollysSister on July 31, 2011
    It freaks me right out when Hermione makes a comment like "well child then" letting me know that soon she will have 2 children with her husband and this all happened in the past. I get goosebumps.

    When Im reading Harry and Hermione together I keep wondering what it was like with Harry and Ginny. At what point did she balk? How is Hermione so much different to be turning him on so? My wicked mind will not rest.
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  • From MollysSister on July 28, 2011
    I am so glad that their meeting to "resolve" their affair went to hell in a handbasket. I much prefer them naked and being naughty!
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  • From MollysSister on July 28, 2011
    ZOMG I was so happy when I popped back to AFF to see this story has been updated. I swear its on my top 10 stories of all time and I dont even ship HG/HP. Thats how bad you have hooked me! Woot!

    I am impressed that Ginny went with Harry to the whore houses. I dont know if I would have been that strong in her shoes. Hermione talking to her about it made my skin crawl. I wanted to shake Hermione and tell her to get the hell out of there!!

    Your Harry all dominate and powerful is really hot. I hope he keeps pushing Hermione around. Seems like she needs it.
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  • From shatzen83 on July 27, 2011
    FRantastic story, I'd some more from you.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 06, 2011
    Excellent writing, as always. And so hot! what really makes this hot is the way you're delving into the psychological aspect of how this came about for both Harry and Hermione, and how it's impacting Hermione at the moment and in retrospect. I love how heady and deep their sexual conversations get. I can totally see both of them probing each other in such a way, trying to understand and at the same time lose themselves in this desire. The image of Harry smoking pot and listening to trippy music while testing his Gryffndor tie for durability is kinda hot. lol. And I love love love that Hermione made a definitive decision to keep seeing Harry and demanded to see more of him! lol. She knows what she wants, now it's a matter of how to do it, and reconcile it with her marriage. That's going to be hard. Still worried about the fallout, but as always looking forward to the ride.
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  • From Reddi on June 26, 2011
    amazing. one of the few authors who has a talent with words, the descriptive talent of reality with a creative dash. I cannot wait to read more. Once you are done with this appetizing story, if you would be interseted I have a challenge that is up regarding a harry/hermion rape scenario that I think only you would be able to capture emotionally and physically if you are interested. I look foward for what you think. Int he meantime i log on every day to see your updates. PS. Your ideas have made for great role play between me and my husband ;) thanks much.
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  • From miafitz on June 26, 2011
    That was a great chapter! I love your writing, it just has this beat to it and reading it is such a pleasure. I feel bad for Ron but at the same time I'm addicted to Harry and Hermione's chemistry in your fic. I can't wait to see how this turns out, how far down they're going to go, if they'll be able to stop before everything blows up in their faces.
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  • From Daye on June 24, 2011
    Interesting I wonder why Harry was in such a state when he rang Hermione? More things going wrong with Ginny? OR just not having been in hermione's knickers for a few days? Pity Hermione was too lusted up to care.

    And Hermione's so revved up she's jumping on Ron? That's going to be double the insult if he ever finds out. That awesome wife-sex you were having? Nah, that's just cause she's got the hots for your best fried.

    Is Harry's wandless magic coming to become significant as the plot goes on?
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  • From melinda1293 on May 27, 2011
    Your writing is just crazy beautiful and the sex is hot Hot HOT.

    "and my lower half seemed to light up like the grid of yellow bulbs over a fairground ride" LOVE THAT LINE. The visual is just spectacular. I simply love that image.

    I really like this dark, dominant, sexy Harry. He
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 23, 2011
    Amazing update. I loved their conversation, everyone is so in character, and when IC Harry lashes out at Hermione for making assumptions it gets me all bothered :) They are really playing a dangerous game here, and it seems to be escalating. I hate that Harry is leaving it all up to Hermione to figure out, like he's incapable of doing so, when we know he usually takes up the role of a leader. But it's also like him to rely on her when he doesn't *want* to figure it out. Great characterization there. I couldn't help but lol@ Ron's mispronunciation of telephone. I feel sorry for the guy, but you make it hard to sustain because the sex between Harry and Hermione is so hot! I think what I love most about this story is not only have complex and emotionally true everything rings but also how you've managed to maintain the UST and sexual chemistry even after a few encounters. You can feel the chemistry between these two, and even empathize with their cheating here. That's hard to do, so bravo. I'm looking forward to seeing if Hermione comes up with a solution or just says damn it all and rides Harry to hell. lol. I have to say also that this is definitely one of the hottest stories I've ever read, and the hottest Harry/Hermione by far, but that still doesn't stop me from being nervous about where this is headed. It doesn't matter though, I'm strapped in and ready to go wherever you take it to the end.
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