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Reviews for Animal Instincts

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  • From hellangelhellina on June 30, 2010
    It's a good so far.
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  • From iononhapaura on June 21, 2010
    Brilliant first chapter... Can't wait to find out about this mysterious wolf... Will Harry meet Fenir in human form or wolf form?... Will it take him long to meet Fenir?... Anyway I love the story and can't wait to read more...

    Io_non_ha_paura
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on June 16, 2010
    "Harry groggily stood up and finally noticed he had an orgasm while sleeping." Since your using past tense the sentence should be "Harry groggily stood up and finally noticed that he'd had an orgasm while sleeping."

    Otherwise, good start.
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  • From worriorbookwyrm on June 16, 2010
    wow! i'm not bugging you but i would really like it if you wrote more! thanks!~
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  • From Elvira on June 16, 2010
    Update soon!!!

    Loved it! Headwig rocks!!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on June 16, 2010
    Very nice beginning here as a prologue, I can't wait for more! Really, there isn't enough Fenrir/Harry literature out there!
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  • From Dxinsider on June 16, 2010
    if this turns out to be a good fic, I will add it to my favs. I love this couple. so I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - L.S. on June 16, 2010
    really nice start :) cannot wait to read more!!
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  • From LadyAura on June 16, 2010
    didn't spot nothing wrong or anything off about the story. i didn't spot any errors in any of your words. and great first chapter and update when ever you can!!!
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