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By : grugster
  • From purpleann on September 16, 2010
    oooh, that was hot! you're terrible, ending on a cliffhanger like that! I love that Hermione is warming up to Yorik, and it was awesome how hard he was trying not to go too far with her...I seriously cannot wait for Hermione's first time with her alpha now!!!

    I also really enjoyed the scene with Neville. I love how you write both of them slowly beginning to recognize and react to their wolfish instincts. Really great!

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on September 16, 2010
    oh my G O D!!!!! I did not see that coming!!!! Is Yorik going to be a menace in this story? Or a dashing addition to hermiones little situation? I cant believe i have to wait!!!! Please update ASAP once a day is not enough! Be fair to your loyal readers lol. All the best from the U.K
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on September 16, 2010
    update update update! I cannot stress enough how much your story is amazing! Im sitting on a pin cushion eagerly awaiting your next installment! Cant wait to see what happens with hermione and Fenrir next! ALl the best from the U.K oxox
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  • From ANON - scarlett on September 15, 2010
    Keep it going! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From Padfootsgrl on September 13, 2010
    I'm still interested. I really like this story.
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  • From ANON - ladydeath089 on September 13, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!!!!!!!!!! LOVE this story!!! its such an interesting story and i would have not minded if it had threesome in it. keep up the good work
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  • From Citten on September 13, 2010
    YEAH a new chapter! :) thank you! for posting, for reading the review and acually reading after know that (i feel like a real idot-thanks again for reading it.) you are a writer so of course you would know that so thanks for writing back! :) i do hope that you will post reguarly for us now that you are some chapters ahead ;)
    (like once a week--please!!) also i dont care if you end up with a 100+ chapters cause when you get a great story like this you want it long and enjoyable (which i know you will do so please just keep going!) also loved the little spanking bit with hermione and fenrir! ;) hope to read more form you soon, real soon!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2010
    Please continue to update! I'm really enjoying your writing
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  • From purpleann on September 12, 2010
    ooh, I loved this chapter, it was like play date for the subs! hilarious. :) I also enjoyed the little "moment" between Hermione and her beta. good times. can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From circe266 on September 12, 2010
    I love this story, especially the Hermione-centric chapters (I'm not a big fan of slash). I can't wait until she 'accepts her wolf'. I'd like it if she comes to revel in her sex kitten/pup role, and manages to twist Fenrir, Yorik, and the other dominant males around her little finger.

    I liked the cuddling with Yorik in this chapter. I hope Fenrir is not too possessive!

    Please post the next chapter soon! Yours is one of the very few stories that I get excited about seeing updates.
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  • From Citten on September 12, 2010
    okay i am loving the story!!! but i am dying for an update! :)
    hey i dont know how you are going to write the (for a lack of better words...) sex but i would like to bring up one thing that most people leave out (either cause they dont think about or dont want to or like the taught...but i will bring it up cause i do and it is up to you and what you want if you put it in.). werewolfs are wolfs that just turn into humans and vise-versa but what i would like to point out is that like dogs wolfs have a sexual tie or knot when the have sex with their mates. now i would love to see but also i wanted to remind you or let you know and if you are intrested in this also that you look at this website: www.wolfcountry.net/information/WolfReproduction.html
    it talks about all the things there that i thaught really intresting in their mating habbits. okay hopefully i was not too annoying or what not but thanks for reading. :)
    (who knows maybe you might put some of that in with the normal human side of our werewolfs for all i know it might have permently changed that part of them as well as many of the other stuff.) ;) until next chapter my dear! :)
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  • From ANON - dawn on September 11, 2010
    love this story!
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  • From Visitkarte on September 11, 2010
    Hi dear

    Don't worry about placing of your story in the wrong section. This site is full of wrong placements and fake warnings. This must be the case when people start writing, have no idea if they maybe feel the urge to write something that demands a warning and start issuing warnings without ever getting to the point.

    This story is very nicely taught and has a great story in the background. I don't think there will be too much drama, but it's certainly not just a simple PWP just for the sake of sex. I love to see the OC and the new characters interacting and the fears of Neville and Hermione. They are not just jumping into the new lifestyle and having fun, they have fears and doubts but a strong will to live. I'm also glad of the point you maketo show the difference between the straight out heroism which is normally getting the heroes killed and the sly survivor tactic and the clever art of bravery that involves being brave when you have a chance to reach the goal you seek and staying behind when you can't protect everybody.

    Please keep on going!

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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on September 10, 2010
    YAY!!! This story just gets better and better. I like that you are taking the time to develop plot and characters. Awesome Job.
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  • From Citten on September 09, 2010
    i just found the story and i love it!!! i love hermione and fenrir stories i just hate that there arent more stories written on them! :) so i am SO happy that you are writing it and in english to boot espically sense you said that it is not your first language--so thank you!! :) i also think that you should not worry about writing some of your slash parts too i am enjoying reading some of it though i am not usually into that. i also am so looking forward to what hermione will do now, i really hope that she will go right to fenrir and be comforted by him and not scared but this is your story and i am just hoping that you will be posting and soon i am just dying to read more and i do hope lots more! i am so enjoying the story!! and i just know that you can make it nice and long with what both hermione and neville's adjustments and maybe even lots more with other problems arising like voldemort not being satified with how things are with them! ;) anyways i am just trying to give you more ideas about how to make things even longer! cause face it i dont get to read very many stories with these two as a couple! :) i do hope that you will be posting regularly i will be watching and waiting for more! PLEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!
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