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By : grugster
  • From purpleann on September 09, 2010
    I am definitely still with you! I enjoy the Neville side story, please don't feel like you have to leave some of it out! I love what you've done with all the characters, and the intrigue among the different ranks and packs and such is really interesting. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 08, 2010
    Great story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - dragonbud on September 05, 2010
    please keep up the good work I'm looking forward to new chaps(:
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  • From ANON - Molly on September 04, 2010
    i think this story is going into an interesting direction! i love it please update soon!
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on September 02, 2010
    I like this story. But the more I read of it, the more I get the feeling it's in the wrong section. If it was more centered strictly on Hermione and Fenrir, I could see it being here no problem. But that isn't the case at all, as the focus is it appears to be on multiple pairings. You might think about moving it if you could over to the threesomes/moresomes category. Good story, wrong area.
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  • From Visitkarte on August 29, 2010
    I don't know what to think of this chapter. But it's just me; I was never a real fan of Draco. And I'd love for Severus to do the deed with Neville first. Maybe they can still be like together, even if Severus must agree to share him with the other werewolves.
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  • From ANON - leewrites on August 18, 2010
    just read the last chapter with draco and neville. it is safe to say that super subs belong to everyone in the clan and can not have a mate. they can be sold if they do not have sex with dominants. they have physical needs to pleasure dominants sexually only. they are only seen and treated as sexual toys. no emotional attachments for them. i can see a lonely life for neville and draco. i mean hermione will be isolated with fenir and the boys only have each other for friendship only because they can not mate and be a family, jumping from bed to different bed each night. everyone else views them a pretty wet holes to fill. and still no one allows herminone and neville proper time to mourn the deaths of their friends from the same creatures. yeah they are alive and have physically changed, but feelings and memories are still with them and to just put that aside just dosen't seem right.
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on August 18, 2010
    Another awesome chapter. I am so glad that you are continuing with the story.
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  • From ANON - colao on August 18, 2010
    definitly still interested...eagerly awaiting more
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  • From Visitkarte on August 17, 2010
    God, this is just... eeeeck! I know urine stinks very long time, but having to stand someones pee in the own hair... I'd puke!
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  • From ANON - xoburntofferings on August 12, 2010
    YAY!!! Please more chapters. I can't get enough....very awesome story.
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  • From CaptainPanda on August 11, 2010
    This story gets better and better! I always get so excited when there's a new chapter. You write so prettily, it's great! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Molly on August 10, 2010
    i lov this story!
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  • From purpleann on August 10, 2010
    OMG. Love it. Keep it coming! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts when she realizes the control she has over them!
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  • From ANON - theotherchick on August 09, 2010
    I don't review much on this site...but I really like this story. I have always seen Hermione as a potential submissive. Her obsessive need for approval is one clear indicator. I have some issues with the Sev/Nev pairing, but can see Nev as a sub as well. The kindness of a female packmate will go a long way towards Hermione's acceptance...good show! I love the clueless inexperience of Fenrir as he navigates the minefield that is his new "pup". I have had issues with the weres being under Moldyshort's control and this view of an independent but aligned were "nation" works well.

    Thanks for the frequent updates. *smooch*
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