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Reviews for Chosen Chains

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From JtheChosen1 on August 26, 2010
    Excellent work here as always! Love finding an update from you :)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 26, 2010
    about #6...

    Either I'm a slow reader or that was a LONG ass chapter. Good Lord! O_O

    Anyway...
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    1. Okay, I'm guessing 'baby steps' for Harry, as he tries to get over his
    ...problem?..and try to have SOME type of understanding with the Weasels.

    But, it was good to see him come alive again towards the end of the chapter.
    I didn't realize I missed that boyish enthusiasm[sp?] and the way he comes alive
    when facing a threat.

    2. I, also, realized how much I missed seeing Draco & Harry duel together! That
    was fun to read....sadistic, but fun! :-)
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  • From NightLo on August 08, 2010
    So...this is Harry's real problem...not very pathological to me...just needing some realization!
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  • From ANON - purple-er on August 05, 2010
    Yay! more chapters. And very interesting reference to Snape having a thing for harry's mother, and therefore harry. not mentioned enough in the fanfic world, in my opinion. :P
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  • From ANON - anonanon on August 05, 2010
    Deep. Self-loathing really seems to be Harry's forte though, he's just not good at letting himself be human and accept inner facets of himself. I'm sure being called a freak by the Dursley's didn't help that. Absolutely fantastic job on this!
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  • From ANON - W on August 05, 2010
    Ok, this chapter surprised me...
    I don't know, I think it's too much a coincidence, that Dumbledore chose a centaur with arrows of darkness as the keeper of the riddle. Perhaps he wanted Harry to face his dark side so that he could heal??
    And I applaud Draco: I would never have found the solution to this riddle! And I applaud you, because I don't know how you manage to come up with them!!!
    As for Harry, I'm really surprised. I didn't think he would refuse Draco so adamantly when he so obviously needed his little session...
    I'm really glad you posted this story, because it's new and beautifully written and catches its readers from the first moment onward^^ I like it and can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From KillingProphet on August 04, 2010
    Harry is being an idiot. There was this one person I once knew who was into certain things their family had raised them to believe were wrong and sinful. That what they was doing was terrible. They would wait till the very last moment to do something about it when they were so angry with themselves and the world around them. It took one person who loved them dearly to make them realize what they thought was wrong was a part of them and that they needed to except it. Now they live a happily 'normal' life going to bed at night with their hands tied. I hope this is where you are going with Harry. I hope you make Harry finally realize that he would have wanted this even if he had lived a 'normal' life and that this is just part of him.
    In the BDSM community a lot of people use bondage and certain scenes as a form of therapy, because in reality it is. In a scene it is the only place your deepest secrets can be laid out in a safe sane environment. It allows you to realize that yes I had a bad day today and now I want you to tie me up so that I can relax and trust that you will take care of me.
    I hope my ramblings made sense.
    Update soon,
    KP
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  • From MaskedLily on August 04, 2010
    Yes I did actually lol. Part of it I figured out before I read this chapter. The part about Venus. And then I Figured out about the centaur and the clearing while I was reading. They kept talking about magical beasts with four legs and eight and something in my head clicked and said centaur and then I thought of the clearing. I didn't think I'd figure it out, but I'm happy I did. And now I'm curios as hell about the next one to see if I can do it again =) Thanks for writing such a great story and doing such a great job as always!! =)
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 04, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on August 04, 2010
    Incredible! You are very skilled at writing plot and character interactions!
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 04, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 5!!!
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  • From ANON - purple-er on July 28, 2010
    yay! been waiting for an update for ages!!! awesome, great, great sex.
    can't wait to see the next chappie.
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  • From Caldonya on July 28, 2010
    So I am enjoying this story another one well done I think. I was wondering if it was harder for you to write as it is something different from what you normally do. In being specifically bdsm ish? I did notice a tad longer between posts between the last two chapters and was wondering if that was the cause?
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  • From MaskedLily on July 27, 2010
    I loved it!!!! For the entire first half of it I was cheering for Draco to figure out what was going on with Harry and find a way to help him. I wasn't sure it would happen in this chapter, but it did and I'm extremely happy about that. Now I just want to see if they can find a way to be together because Draco is obviously what Harry needs and Draco is the only one that can really giv it to him. Not to mention the riddle that you have set for the second clue. I think I have figured out part of it, but not all. I will definitly try and figure it out though. And it just makes waiting for the next chapter all that much harder becuase I want to know of I'm anywhere near right.
    Fabulous job with this chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next one =)
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  • From JtheChosen1 on July 27, 2010
    Very INTENSE and EMOTIONAL here! I LOVE it haha! Excellent work, I can't wait to see what else you have planned!
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