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Reviews for Hysteria

By : LadyofClunn
  • From WesleyY7 on July 21, 2010
    Chapters 3 and 4 were darker than the previous chapters, but no less compelling. You don't find too many stories on this site that 1-make you think and 2-teach you something. (Well, there are other stories here that have taught me something, but nothing I'd share in polite company!) I find this story interesting not only because it's well written but also because it's more than dark smutty stuff used to excite readers. Harry Potter fans are entertained by so many things in fic that in reality is disgusting. (chan, incest, beastiality, noncon, etc.) Not knocking anyone's kinks (because some of mine are out there) but this story is showing me how conditioned I've become to all that is out there. Draco's exam in chapter three was hot and amazing, even though in real life that would be a violation. Even that keeper guy in chapter 4-there was a split second (just a second) that where I thought oh, dub-con! Even though it's wrong, wrong, wrong, and Hermione is in a vary bad place emotionally and literally, that one moment made me step back and self reflect. I hope I'm making sense. tl;dr - Your story is amazing and makes me think.

    One other comment though - when Draco comes back into the story (as I'm assuming he will) I'm hoping to see a little more into his character. Not that this story is about him, but Healer!Draco has been so kind and considerate, I kind of miss his snark and bite. Looking forward to more!
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  • From katiekrm on July 21, 2010
    This fic has definitely taken a disturbing turn, but you did warn us. Man! Hermione is pretty much being sexually assaulted. I really hope Draco comes to her rescue and she is able to take the license away from this whack job and stop these horrid treatments for others. I'm wondering if that poor woman in the tub is dead. I really can't stand torture fics b/c I find them too disturbing, but now I really just want to see her get rescued. And some justice. I'm totally sucked in.
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  • From incognito on July 20, 2010
    I found the first two chapters intriguing but the last two made me feel uncomfortable. I believe that was the intention but it seemed to go on too long. I hope you reintroduce Draco soon because I don't want to read another chapter where Hermione is tortured.
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  • From ANON - Rose Syler on July 20, 2010
    it's been so long since i've read a genuinely well-written hp fanfic, id almost given up hope of finding one. thank you for writing this. the amount of effort you've put into the story is overwhelming, be it the characterizations, the setting, or the background and commentary on the medical practice.

    your story is fascinating and intelligent, a real breath of fresh air. im looking forward to your next update!
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  • From Solariel89 on July 19, 2010
    O_O ...Wow. Remind me never to get Witches Hysteria. lol

    Who is the keeper? And please tell me Harry does actually realize Hermione's missing and Draco makes it to her rescue before she really goes insane.

    Do please update soon! You have me hanging on the edge of my seat!
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  • From luna4917 on July 19, 2010
    Sweet Merlin, poor Hermione. I can't imagine how she will be able to recover from this and trust anyone again. How will she be able to trust another healer or even Draco for that matter. I'm surprised the Ministry hasn't been called in by anyone over the years to investigate the treatments given. I realise the treatments are from a time gone by, but seriously!
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  • From mirrorofrapture on July 15, 2010
    My god... I live this story, but that last bit had me freaked out, especially because I am going into the medical field. What a horrible treatment. It reminded me of One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest (a very good book in my opinion...) I can't wait to read more. I hope she makes it out of there alive!
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  • From dragongirl on July 12, 2010
    My poor Hermione........... and where is Draco when all this is happening? Need someone to rescue her asap......... LOL
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  • From QuicksilverEyes on July 10, 2010
    WOW! I totally did not expect the story to go there. But way to go, you just took it to a whole new level! I was so disturbed by what happened to Hermione and I absolutely hate healer Belleme now. He better get what's coming to him.

    Also, it doesn't seem like Draco is the least bit interested in Hermione right now as more than a patient. Is he just really good at hiding his feelings or will they develop later on? This story is really interesting and I can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From nitesfool on July 10, 2010
    Oh my... this is not what i was expecting.... i absolutely love the plot... i've never ready any story with this particular theme so i'm extremely interested in what you write next.... do u have any semi-regular posting schedule that u follow... i think knowing that would cut down on some of my anxiety on when i can read the next part. ok... keep up the good work!
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  • From starrynite45 on July 10, 2010
    poor Hermione, finally getting herself into trouble!! Will Malfoy come to the rescue?
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  • From Solariel89 on July 09, 2010
    Oh my god, you really weren't kidding when you said it would get dark, were you...? Wow. It really does seem hopeless in the third chapter. Normally, this kind of feeling would make me stop reading, but this is just too damn good. By all means, keep writing. I check the site every day for an update on the stories I read and I'm very anxious for the next one. :D
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  • From luna4917 on July 09, 2010
    No kidding we're heading into the dark recesses....still, knowing Hermione, she'll find a way to fight back as best she can until the 'knight' in question rescues her. I hope she doesn't have to endure too much torture in the mean time. How in the bloody hell has no one caught on to what this arse is doing to women? And why in the hell is that nurse helping him? To borrow a phrase from Hermione...'What An Idiot.' BTW...does Draco still have her panties?
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  • From luna4917 on July 08, 2010
    Sooo, Healer Malfoy getting distracted? I can't imagine a Malfoy losing his focus on anything, anytime. Is he a little attracted to his patient? Darker huh? That could be very interesting!!
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  • From MoonyBear on July 06, 2010
    This is a great story so far. Do hope that you will update with the next chapter soon.
    Ha, poor Hermione being spread out and fondled by Draco like that. Though she doesn't seem to mind TOO much lol.
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