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Reviews for Finding Draco Malfoy

By : caressedbythorns
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 03, 2012
    Oh holy moly!!!! Who is their back up?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 14, 2012
    The story thus far...#19.

    First of all, I'd like to thank you for chap. 17...and the prayer you put there, it
    really gave me inspiration to pray more thoroughly in my life, whenever I feel a
    little dip in my 'faith well'. :-)

    Also, I must commend you, it's not everyday someone has 'the balls' to tackle religion
    & magic in a story, I know for a fact these type of stories are few and far between, I
    think most people are scared of other folks opinions.

    All in all, despite a rocky six chapter start, you've truly come a long way..keep up
    the good work.
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  • From Sailorlorelei on December 16, 2011
    Interesting tale, though I'm sad to say riddled with problems. One the entire ministry attack was written in a confusing manner, there were simply too many breaks and not enough transition. Plus the characters suddenly knew more than they had the chapters before, such as Draco's love for Harry. You also hinted strongly to Draco being abused by Lucius, something that was only mentioned in passing before and now seems to be told to us as something the reader already knows. Two, all throughout the chapters are instances of typos and wrong words, such as we instead of he, or bead instead of bed. If it was only a few times it would be ignorable however it occurs constantly through the course of the chapter and every chapter at that. Definitely continue its a good idea and story, however take your time. Develops your ideas and the characters before you change scenes and point of views. Don't worry about cramming so many character's views into the chapter, more time and development with one person is better than scrambled tid bits from a hoard of people. On another note I hope you update soon and I look forward to the next chapter.

    ~Fullmoon
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  • From tinkerbell1989 on September 16, 2011
    Very, VERY interesting! This story just keeps getting better and better :D
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  • From tinkerbell1989 on September 16, 2011
    I really love this story! I have gotten so into it that I keep forgetting to review LOL I am sorry about that. Keep up the good work (:
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2011
    Things are lookin bad for Pans.
    so, they stopped 'voldimort' temporarily. How do they stoop him perminantly?
    Need more spaces or something else to indicate where a new chunk or scene is starting otherwise they all run together.
    even something as simple as
    ----------------------
    is effective.
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  • From bloodshound on July 20, 2011
    wow, this story really moves. I like that. ^^
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  • From ANON - heartstar on July 20, 2011
    Very cool Ilove this story so far I wouldlove to see more when you can thank you....
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  • From undeademopixi on July 19, 2011
    So, just sat down and read all of this at once, and I gotta say I really enjoyed it. The concept is well thought out, and the religious twist works into the story line in a really interesting way. Some mistakes with the names and places could be fixed - Blaise Zabini, Voldemort, Grimmauld place- but on the whole, I really love what you have, and I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 03, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 10!!!!
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  • From thyladyx on July 13, 2010
    nie chapter. I don't think I like severus/ron. I figure Severus is kinda like Edward Cullen. I may have done terrible things but I'm not gonna srew this up too. I feel that line would be relations with students. Even recently graduated ones. I went to your profile I couldnt find the poll or I would've voted
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  • From thyladyx on July 10, 2010
    dun dun DUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN oh no! *home alone face* what has he found?!?!!? Poor Sissy and Drakey theyre having quite a rough time of it arent they? Don't you think you could ease up on them just a little? Cant wait for more!...oh and thanks, its nice to know my reviews are appreciated
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  • From hellangelhellina on July 08, 2010
    I hope she'll be ok even just for draco's sake. Um i might have missed it but whats the secret?
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  • From ryuchan001 on July 02, 2010
    Heys, i like ur story, seems cool. Just wanted you to know it's Blaise ZABINI not ZaMbini...
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  • From thyladyx on July 01, 2010
    ooh the plot thickens...very interesting so far. I cant wait for more...one question though, In the first chapter when Harry "fell off his broom" onto Draco is that going to be important in an it wasn't an accident kind of way?
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