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Reviews for Hostage of War

By : LadyofClunn
  • From ANON - Donavon on August 27, 2010
    I was slow to read your story, the plot made me pause.

    However, after reading, crying with so much feeling because of this chapter you have a reader awaiting every update of this stthory.
    I even cried at the thought of Hermione finding the only painting of Severus.

    Well done and best wishes,
    Donavon.

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  • From Ravengirl7 on August 27, 2010
    Oh it was Severus! I don't read that pairing often so it was a bit of a suprise for me. Really touching though. Can't wait for more!
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  • From chyara on August 27, 2010
    So far my favorite bit of your story is that of she and Severus. With just that scene, you ripped the emotions from me. Making it 3 dimensional, as opposed to the 1-2 dimensions i was getting up to that point. I had myself imagining Hermione telling Severus' portrait that she bore him a son, and hid him far away from the war. LOL Really sparked the imagination.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From katiekrm on August 27, 2010
    I am greatly enjoying this! I can't wait to see their relationship further develop. I love that you inserted a bit of their history and how Draco was already attracted to Hermione. It was very interesting to find out that Severus was her lost love. I'm glad she'll have a friend in that household, even if he is just a portrait.
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  • From Ravengirl7 on August 27, 2010
    Really enjoying this story and I can't wait for your next post.
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  • From ANON - nitesfool on July 13, 2010
    this story is delicious... i can't wait for ur next update... keep up the good work.
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  • From mrequecky on July 12, 2010
    Yay, great tension :D
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  • From amsev on July 12, 2010
    What a very dark and compelling tale you have here. I'm looking forward to see their continued interactions. Perhaps would be interesting to see interactions of the "hostages" on the side of the Light as well? Just a though, not sure if you have this completed or not.
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  • From Vyper on July 11, 2010
    This story is awsome. I can't wait to read more. Draco is such a naughty boy teasing Hermine and then walking away.
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 11, 2010
    Funny chap. Surprised that that happened though. What will the morning bring?
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  • From straightlyconfused on July 11, 2010
    The idea of an armistice is very good. Its definitely a plot which has not yet been shared on AFF.
    So far your story is very interesting and I am sure - if it continues the way its started - it will succeed in engaging the attention of many readers.
    Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From lemonade8 on July 09, 2010
    You know, I was afraid this would be a horrific!torture fic, but you have pleasantly surprised me. I am very interested in where the story goes from here.
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  • From dracoschick007 on July 09, 2010
    Great start. I really like this. I am looking forward to see how the Malfoys treat Hermione over the next few years.
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  • From mrequecky on July 08, 2010
    Wow, great setup, love it already!
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  • From Kayrox133 on July 07, 2010
    I love the comment from Narcissa"I always wanted a girl" and Draco's subsequent disbelief. I can't wait to see what's next.
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