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Reviews for A Different Kind of Magic--UNDERGOING EDIT

By : Remarkable

From ANON - Tito on September 20, 2010
last time he initiated sex with her was in the same manner and she rewarded him with fellatio, ...... i wonder how will she reward him in the next time.

i like what happened (i absolutely dont like rape, it is same as torture and murder in cold blood but i like the concept "who plays with fire ... get burnt").

what did she expect from a rapist who does not know what love (not sex) means.

what was Minnerva thinking by making Rapistan their contact ?!
didnt she encourage her to break her affair with him earlier?

it seems that Minerva is depending on him in everything (even if he is ill suited for the task). that is a sign of very bad strategist/manager ( putting all eggs in one basket specially when this basket is a death eater, even Dumbeldoor didnt depend on Snape in everything like this (he wasnt tasked with destroying horocxes))

what will Minerva do ?
this point is the crossroad. i want to know what her reasoning for her next decision will be.

it is typical for a rapist to use force and hold the victim to prevent its escape... then put the blame on the victim forgetting that whatever the seduction presented it could be thwarted by leaving the place or just turning his face into the other direction.

i just hope that Hermione does not cover up Rapistan.

i think the story had passed the disturbing part
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
First off, I want to say that both Minerva and Molly were right, and Hermione needed to hear this! Secondly, Monagamy does not "stink on ice", and it was God who had a hand in creating monogamy!He gave it his blessing in the bible. For those who do not believe in God, try this logical reasoning: Pologamy was needed in the beginning in order to grow earth's population. As you can see, that hasn't been needed for a long time, so monogamy came about. All that rubbish about humans being unable to be monogamous is just an excuse for selfish behavior they know in their heart of hearts is wrong!I know quite a few couples who are faithful to each other, and are happy about it! Minerva's love was not treating her like a prize to be won! He loved her and only her, and rightly expected the same commitment from her! She was the one being deceitful to both, not only that, the man she cheated with was her love's best friend, which probably spurred him on to greater feelings of betrayl and acts of rage! What a tragedy! I hope Hermione can learn from Minerva's mistakes! Minerva got used to having her cake and eating it too, and she didn't want to give it up, and she learned the hard way about toying with people's emotions. Imho, we as human beings need fidelity and commitment from our partners! I want to be enough for the man I marry, and I want him to be enough for me. I don't need casual sex, or God forbid threesomes! It is too confusing, and too self-indulgent! I want to spend my life with one man, who will be the father of my children! If that seems old-fashioned to some, so be it! I want one person to live, laugh, and love with, if that seems selfish, well maybe in a sense it is, but again maybe your beliefs that having more than one partner are selfish. We only have to answer to ourselves and God (even if you don't believe) Anyway, sorry about the rant, and I am even sorrier that we have to wait for another part! I am sure it will be worth the wait! I also changed my mind, I will be here to the bitter end! Hopefully a happy one for Draco, Serverus, Ava, Teddy, and Lupin!
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
i think that author note should have been revealed early.
now i am intrigued in that darkness (which is taking hold in her mind).
does that darkness have relation to the prophecy?

Molly and Minnerva handled Hermione quite well.

Rabastan was clear that he will use any willing body even if it was just used by someone else, it is very hard to think that this kind of pervert can know what the word "jealousy" means.

anther unnoticed matter is..... you had explained why the order was so suspicious of anyone, why the ministry was behaving so strangely and why it seemed that everyone was mad at a time.

the small hints and details are starting to make sense now.

btw did you permanently stop updating at Ashwinder (it was there i caught this story and i came here after i realized that you stopped posting)

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From ANON - Christopher on September 19, 2010
I have to disagree with Minerva here. The best thing that the two friends could have done was to realize that Minerva was attracted to both of them EQUALLY and stop treating her like some goddamned prize that only one of them could have! This is the EXACT reason why monogamy (a human invention, by the way) stinks on ice.
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
What is going on? Why is Serverus acting like this? I know he can be abrasive at times and self-doubting, but this seems like over the top. Although she does deserve it. I hope this doesn't push her towards Ratbatan, although I am still not sure I want her with Serverus, she doesn't deserve to be happy with anyone else! Is someone or something controlling them? I also hope Serverus and the order take good care of Teddy! Keep the chapter coming!
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
she went to Rabastan !! i think Hermione added a new meaning to word "bitch".
did she become mentally unstable?

i like Harry's decision.

will Severus magic return because he had found pupose and someone to love in most pure way (as a family) (father and son) and that love be reciprocated (for first time of his life).
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
fast updates means fast reviews (i think).

did Hermione commit suicide OR did She leave the house or just hiding.
does her headpiece (that thing which enable her to speak) work on muggles or she is mute to them.

finally Severus is back.

i hope Draco had escaped.
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From ANON - sandlapper on September 19, 2010
I am still reading as I think the storyline itself is excellent. I DO read lots of Dark stories and while some of the things here have been harsh, I understood that from the start. My main problem is that I started reading this, after all the warnings, because it was SS/HG. I do not see how you could ever reconcile what Hermione has done with a relationship between her and Severus. If there had been even a tiny inkling that she was being forced or tricked I would feel different, but what she is doing has no excuse. I agree with Tito, I am interested in seeing what molly will say and please lets ditch Rabastan soon. And Grace, I agree with your assessment of Hermione. She ought to be getting a paycheck from Rabastan. I have read many characterizations of Hermione most of them OOC, but I don't like this version at all.
Poor Severus, now maybe everyone will treat him decently. Well, I sit back to wait on the next update...I don't know if it was your intention, remarkable, but I am loving to hate this story!!
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
@Tito, sorry for the mixup! I should know better than to assume a person's sex in the world of fan-fiction!
Now, where the hell is that @#$%^! I am definetly going to have to go to confession after this story is done! By the way, is it all written and almost complete? By the way, Harry is off my bad list now due to this chapter! Hermione I fear will never be off it! I know I shouldn't judge, but she lets this man use her, and then she not only betrays Serverus in the bed he made love to her in, but she got over her fear of bj's with that Ratbastan, not Severus, who imho deserves it more! Add to that, that she is unwilling to stay away from him even if it hurts the man she claims to "love" She knows nothing of the word!
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
the chapter's name is :honor defended.
i fail to see honor in Harry since he gave Hermione his blessing earlier, i fail to see honor in Hermione , her last thought was she may WANT to have sex Rabastan even if Severus returned.

the scandal is the most realistic result, i mean did she take any contraceptive yet ? i didnt take note of any thing relating to protection in their relationship.

Rabastan is declaring what he wants in front of the order is so daring and disgusting (a real characteristic of him), he doesnt care that he knows nothing about the body which he use to his pleasure.

Hermione deserves what happened.

i hope this will be the waking up moment for her.

i am interested in Molly's reaction to what happens under her roof.

if the end of Rabastan affair with hermione is near, please post it all in this ultra super speed, swallowing the whole bitter potion in one go is better than drawing it long.

thanks for this record destroying fast updates.

@ Grace:
IMHO stands for in my humble opinion (i dont know if it should be in capital).
thanks
btw i am a he. lol.
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
I apologize to Tito. I just went back and reread the reviews, and realized I was spelling her user name wrong! Sorry!
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
I agree with what Toto said, by the way, what does IMHO mean? As you can tell, I am not up on all the internet lingo! LOL! I guess I am in til the bitter end. Especially since everytime I check, I see a new chapter! Please keep the chapters coming, don't draw out the angst please! As far as Hermione, I hope she gets her just desserts! I can't wait to read Harry's reaction when he hears who Hermione is whoring with! Sorry to sound so judgemental, but that is what she is doing! She also seems to be hurting both men, and although Rabastan deserves it, I fear he will harm Severus in some way! I also agree with Toto that Remus, Ava, Severus, and Draco are the only decent characters here! I am not saying Harry, because I am mad about what he said about Severus, and his encouragement of Hermione's activities. I also think Hermione loss the right to be angry on Snape's behalf, since she is the one who is going to hurt him the most!
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
well..... this will be a graphic story filled with depravity, any reader reached this chapter will have to accept that.

the strange thing is: i still want to read the story, i never before encountered any story like this, i mean this story is both disgusting yet stimulating, it is like being the thing and its own opposite in the same breath.

thats some ability.

i think that Hermione is a bitch in heat letting any dog to mount her because she simply happened to see it (the dog).

i cease to think that this story is SS/HG anymore, personally i hate to see them back together, i mean.... Severus insulted and eventually lost Lily because she was flirting with Potter and making out Remus, then what should be his reaction when he knows that Hermion is having sex with the man who stole everything from him and that man is D.E and rapist in the same time,

so i am indifferent to Hermione and whatever fate that awaits her.

to make things short the only good characters (IMHO) are Severus, Remus, miss Longbottom and Draco.

sorry for the long review.
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From ANON - Grace52373 on September 19, 2010
I don't know if I will be able to read this anymore either. It's a great story, but I like SS/HG as a couple, and I don't think I could root for them anymore, since I think Severus deserves better, and should dump her lying, cheating, whoring ass! Hermione is so selfish in this! Poor Severus! First Rabastan takes his job, his spying, and now the woman he loves! Part of me hopes he does find out what she did, and casts her out of his life, and finds a real woman! The other part which loves Hermione and Severus together, still wants them to be together. Not as a threesome with Ratbaston (mispelling deliberate!), but as the loving couple they were before these evil people intruded. Severus is being incredibly brave and selfless, and Hermione is being cowardly and selfish! She is the one who is not worthy of Severus, and it would take alot of groveling for me to be okay with them getting back together! As for the other stuff, Remus's breakdown was surprising,but it seems like everyone is giving into their darksides. Is it something in the air? Part of Malfoy's master plan? The weird stuff going on in the ministry has me intrigued, but I am still wondering if I want to continue. Angst is stressful, and I have enough stress in my life! If I don't finish reading, I may still pop in after it's done and see how it all ends. I don't know. Despite my reservations, you have a great story here! Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - Tito on September 19, 2010
anther sick chapter.

the third will be the charm.
i really hate when great story becomes a depraved one, lets hope that was the last of this behavior.
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