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Reviews for Phoenix Rising

By : DoctorDrarry
  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 11, 2010
    Good. A few grammatical snags to fix.

    "Apep yawned his jaws" you mean "stretched his jaws." The other way makes no sense.

    "until his body was full to overflowing with the life force of the unwilling" you mean "until his body was full to the point of overflowing with the life force of the unwilling"

    Otherwise,good chap. You remind me that I need to update soon! LOL.

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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 09, 2010
    wow that was good i am looking 4ward to reading more...great job
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  • From angelmuziq on July 09, 2010
    Oh Man I wish you weren't a Grad student and super busy because this is one of the BEST fanfictions I've read to date! You certainly know how to capivate an audience, and with your first chapter! Shoot your first sentence about sums it up! LOL. I love how Harry is borderline obsessed with Draco, and the whole push him over any avaiable surface, yummy! It seems your fic has everything a lil romance-even Ron and Hermione are cute. A lil inheritance action-I loooove Powerful!Harry especially with wings. I wonder if this story will be mostly about Harry accepting his inheritance or if there will be evil that needs to be defeated or something along those lines. Either way I look forward to reading this awesome fic. Especially since you left us hanging with that cliffy! How's Draco going to react to what Harry did? I hope he'll be intrigued and attracted to Harry'd amazing power ;) And it seems like you'll make Harry more Dominant or boy do I hope so because there aren't that many fics with him like that and I savor any ones that I can find. Also will this be MPreg? Anyway I think I've written enough, no need to sit around reading my review when you have chapters to write! LOL May the muse be with you so you can crank out another chapter or 20 and all with your super busy schedule. Thanks for writing this awesome fic and I look forward to reading more of your work as I hope this will not be the only fic that you upload because I think you'll be another author that I can't get enough stories from. Keep up the great work both here and in school so you can write even more! hehe. Eagerly awaiting your next masterpiece chapter. :)
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  • From DestinyDragon on July 09, 2010
    Awesome!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From AngelNarcissa90 on July 09, 2010
    Wow. This is good. Please update, I'd like to read more.
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  • From thyladyx on July 09, 2010
    holy flannel shirts batman!!! that was a crazy start!...The title and first few paragraphs feel slightly familiar have you posted this somewhere else before? regardless that was an awesome start and I can't wait to see more.
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