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Reviews for Shadows and Orbs

By : TouchoftheWind
  • From Harpygirl78 on October 09, 2010
    MORE SOON!!!! I like the story it is addicting and I just got sucked into it. But you left of at a cliffhanger and I HATE IT! I want to know what happens so please update soon
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  • From nimby465 on August 24, 2010
    this story is amazing please update soon so i can find out what happens next
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  • From MissiYoung on August 11, 2010
    I generally hate this cross, but damn is this good. Surprising to myself, I am going to keep a lookout for future updates! Your writing style is spot on, and your story is engaging-I'm sad to have reached the most recent post!
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  • From mysta99 on August 05, 2010
    I was bored and searching for something to read, when I came across your story. It captured my attention and kept me captivated. I haven't read a story this good in quite some time. Very well written and highly entertaining. I can't wait to read more!! Thank you for sharing this amazing story!!
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  • From ANON - LadyStyxx on August 02, 2010
    It is amazing! I love the plotline! My only problem is that this site doesn't allow story alerts so I know when you update :(
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  • From hellangelhellina on July 28, 2010
    Well just relize I didn't reveiw this story when I read it so I'm doing it now. Better lat then never. I cought this story at the last chapter so got a few thing to say. Frist I have always fond Harmoine annoying so to read a story that keeps her the pretty much the same and still show how much of a pain she is it refreashing. It might be just me but I want Ginny and Melinda to have painful deaths. Like I said just what I say. Oh that thing with Sirius made me want to slap him into next month. Glad Draco and the twins are ok, feel sorry for his mom though. Luna is awsome. Just had to throgh that in there. Ron's an ass. Now that's all I can think of. Up date soon. It's a really good story.
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  • From Sanchan85 on July 18, 2010
    Ok, I definitly love this story!!!

    The storyline is creative, there are suprising turns in it, good side lines, just perfect!!!
    The only thing I am not content with is you spelling... you should get a beta to check you verb times and your use of "and", it often appears double.

    I like the idea of the dementors... I always had the question in mind where they came from, and your explanation is great.
    I also like that Harry is not too forgiving with Sirius and Remus. He is the King of Darkness, he cannot go all fluffy on them. Great!
    And the scene with the demon beheading was also great, he had to make an impression to get them to listen! I wouldn't have belived it if they had followed him without him showing strength.

    I am looking forward to Wyatt bringing his subordinates to order... he cannot just behead a buch of people... he is the Light King... he has to be just and fair and all that.... will be interesting how you will let him manage that.

    And the fight with the last Dark King and Melinda at the same time will be one major chapter. I am holding my breath so don't keep me waiting too long!!! ;-)

    Bye Sanchan
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  • From evanone on July 14, 2010
    I read all of your stories and hav only one thing to say...MORE. I hope you update soon, and not only 'Shadows'.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 11, 2010
    so need more!!!!!!!!!!!!

    just love this story

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