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Reviews for Love, Free as Air

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Oscillum on September 08, 2010
    I thought your most recent chapter was quite refreshing, and I enjoyed it immensely, particularly Harry's conversation with Severus at the end. It just shows all three of them need each other in their own ways. Though, I'm sure they still have quite a bit to learn. I would say you have nothing to worry about as far as convicing goes, to comment on your response to my previous review. You do a suberb job of bringing them together in a way that's both satisfying and believable.

    Happily awaiting to read more! Kudos to you so far.
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  • From Darkless on September 08, 2010
    And the dance continues....

    I'm back! And you've got some lovely new chapters for me (ok, not just for me, but I'm enjoying them like they are :P )

    Oh my, Draco is only hiding, not dealing with anything. Harry is right (and it's been said many a time, even by myself to myself: I'm a libra, and if you know about them, 'nuff said) that even not making a decision is a dicision in and of itself. Procratinating only makes problems, questions and issues get larger, it doesn't make them go away or solve themselves.

    Luckily, it's only the small decisions I have problems with. As long as you have certain morals and convictions in your life, the big descisions are easy. Draco apparently doesn't know what he wants, hence the choices seem daunting enough that he either wants them to disappear or he just wants someone else to make the 'decisions' for him. But life doesn't work that way. Things left to themselves often spoil: the pot on the stove, the fruit on the tree, things left unsaid, and relationships un-nurtured. He's all too willing to fall back into habitual patterns, which is disappointing when he had started to question what he wanted while still at Grimmauld Place. His head & heart are not in the same place, so he's confused.

    Some people have to learn things the hard way, unfortunate but true. And some of those stubborn people need harsher lessons than most. I wonder how hard a lesson Draco will need to snap him out of his safe little bubble? What pin will burst him into reality?

    Ah, I love a good long story that makes the old gray matter jump up and dance. I'm avid for more! I'll be waiting.
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  • From niceladysakura on September 08, 2010
    i definitely agree with Severus! Harry should often lose his temper if it is to make Draco realize some stupid thing he did...

    hmmm...finally Severus and Harry get a long now, and hopefully that Draco and Harry soon..

    thanks for updating, its been a while and i havent reviewed the last chapter

    please update soon

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  • From MaskedLily on September 07, 2010
    I'm glad Harry finally lost his temper with Draco. He needs a good kick in the ass to get him moving along the right path. And the Harry/Severus situation is coming along nicely lol. Great job, can't wait for more!!!! =)
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  • From Claushiru on September 06, 2010
    Yes, Draco has been oh-so-inviting! Tch, how can he even hope to get Harry to be all over him with affection when he throws Harry away like he is a nuisance? Draco desperately needs a nice kick in the butt. To be hit in the face hard enough to scratch his pretty face. Perhaps HE should be the one doing the courting of Harry next when he notices how he and Severus have grown close. HA!

    Can you tell Draco's behavior is getting on my nerves?
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  • From ANON - Oscillum on September 05, 2010
    I've absolutely adored every story of yours that I've read (which is quite a few of them), and this story is no exception. I think that the Harry/Draco/Severus stories have been my favorites. I think the three of them are such a wonderful threesome. You certainly make all three of them so complex and believable which is what I appreciate, because I can really connect with them. You're a marvelous story-teller, and I just hope some day I can write with the same talent and passion you do.

    Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter!
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  • From kittyperry on September 03, 2010
    I've really enjoyed your slow progression of their relationship. Well written.
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  • From MaskedLily on September 02, 2010
    I'm getting so excited to see what happens with Harry and Severus. Not to mention the mix with Draco. I want more I tell you. MORE!!!! Great job lol!!!! =)
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  • From MaskedLily on September 01, 2010
    I love it!! Draco making choices, Severus changing, and Harry finally starting to figure out what he wants. I'm so excited to see where this goes!!!! Great job!!!! =)
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  • From Wishstar on August 30, 2010
    Blue: So cute...
    and it made sence how it played out. The only other threesome I read with this pairing had it too rushed into the pairing that it didn't make sence.
    Falcon: You're a great author, keeping the characters in character in any situation you write, thinking of how they'd react to each other. I bow to your expertise.
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  • From niceladysakura on August 29, 2010
    thanks for updating!

    oh! finally draco agreed, i just hope it turns out well

    and they are going to be lovers soon..

    looking forward to the future chapters

    please update sonn
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  • From ANON - Lady-Claw on August 27, 2010
    Love the Story. Bad cliff... ;) Hope next Chap comes up real soon. Greets from Switzerland Lady-Claw
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  • From ANON - W on August 25, 2010
    Oh wow... I just realized that this is a threesome-story...
    I can understand Draco's action (or lack thereof), but at the same time I think it's already beyond self-destructive behaviour. And this makes me wonder wheather either of his 'lovers' is the right choice for him: Snape wants to make all his decisions for him (or at the very least influence them a great deal) and Harry lets him do whatever he pleases, even when the action are likely to be bad for Draco... Neither of them sounds like proper lover-material...
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 25, 2010
    Giggle, giggle, squee squee squee!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this chapter. It was like surfacing from exploring an underwater ship. It was interesting and gripping, but now I feel like I can breathe without thinking about it. I love your Severuses. I always love the rest of your characters too, but he adds a dangerous, sharklike intensity that makes me especially love your version of him and all the stories you have with him in it.

    Thank you,

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on August 25, 2010
    I'm surprised that Snape is moving so fast with this relationship with Harry and that those memories would be enough to make him consider a relationship at all. I cant wait to see how Draco reacts to all of this.
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