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Reviews for Love, Free as Air

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  • From RiverWhispers on August 24, 2010
    *Does a little cheer for Sev.*

    Such an adorable chapter. Well, I thought so anyways. I love how Snape just let it go and realized that he can give in to his needs and be someone that others care about at the same time.
    I love how you write these boys, as a lot of writers tend to pool Draco and Snape or Harry and Snape in this threesome, giving them the same mindset. But, in your story, each character has their own personality and their own views on what the relationship should be like. I really enjoy reading Love, Free as Air, and that's one of the reasons.

    Also, major kudos for having Severus to be the one introducing the threesome and avoiding the sappy, "I just wanna love everyone" Harry that most authors are drawn to. Your writing makes me very happy. And the thing with the tables and romantic dialog definitely got my goat. :)
    loves,
    River

    p.s. I'm posting a new story very very soon called The Things That Tear Us Apart. I'd love if you'd review it. It would mean a lot to me :)
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  • From Claushiru on August 24, 2010
    I wonder if it ever crossed Harry's mind that Severus is old enough to be his father. I understand how Draco's fascination/love of him comes from a long history between them, how Severus saved him so personnaly. But Harry? He has it bad. Would a very good male kisser on the street, and a cutie to top it all, generate the same instant "hmm, I want more of this" in Harry's head?

    I kept imagining Draco barging in throughout all this chapter! When Severus offered his friendship, when he seised Harry's wrist, when he kissed Harry... It's amusing to imagine Draco's face XD
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  • From pittwitch on August 24, 2010
    Oh me, oh my! I go away for a bit and come back to such wonderful plot advancements! Thanks so much for sharing. Can't wait to see how our three laddies live in close quarters ...
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  • From niceladysakura on August 24, 2010
    wow!

    i haven's review for the last two chapter... i was kinda busy and i still didnt finish reading it, and im gonna reread it again..

    the story is improving and the relationship of the 3 of them! i can't wait and hopefully Draco will be okay with it in the end! wow! i always love harry and severus to end up together...and then the 3 of them...

    does that mean that harry now likes severus? and they are now lovers?!cool!

    please update soon

    can't wait for the future chapters
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  • From RosalieAyers on August 24, 2010
    Sigh... So now we are getting into the yumminess...

    I hope Draco jumps all over the idea of Harry staying, and I kinda know he will, even if he is reluctant at first, because this is a threesomes/moresomes story, and it can't progress to that if Draco doesn't comply.

    =D
    Sorry I have nothing else to say, except I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
    ^_^

    Rosalie Ayers
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  • From ANON - ThePurplePanda on August 23, 2010
    I can't wait to see how this all works out! I completely identify with Draco in this chapter. I am going through a few issues right now that are turning me in circles as well. I am excited to see how you have it play out. I am a big fan of your fictions. Keep up the good work!

    ~ The Purple Panda
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  • From hellangelhellina on August 22, 2010
    Draco is so confused. I hope he has his epheny ( not shore if I spelled that right) soon. Everyone elsa got there moment to lern about them self on a deep level. I can't wait to see how they all get together.
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  • From RosalieAyers on August 22, 2010
    I, for one, can understand what is going through Draco's mind. I left and went back to my ex-bf Gary several times, and our relationship was much like the one you have portrayed here... Except for Gary didn't brew potions, and I do not have testicles...
    I feel sorry for Harry, having to be stuck in the middle of this, with mixed feelings for Draco. Am I wrong in assuming that Snape wants Harry and Draco, instead of just Draco? Am I getting the wrong vibes here? I sure hope not =D!!!
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  • From ANON - Squeeky on August 18, 2010
    I absolutely love this story! I started reading it last night and I'm so eager for the next chapter. Your writing is wonderful and I'd love to see more parrot!Harry in the future.
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  • From MaskedLily on August 18, 2010
    I loved it. And I especially loved the fact that the post owl was shy. It had me giggling and smiling to picture it. I also can't wait for Severus' reply so I can see what he's willing to change. I also want to see how Draco handles the situation of almost to much freedom. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Fabulous job!! =)
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  • From RiverWhispers on August 17, 2010
    i think i get a little too excited when there is a new chapter! keep it up!
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  • From RosalieAyers on August 17, 2010
    Aww, Poor Harry, getting as good as rejected by Draco, even after Draco initiated the feelings in Harry with a Kiss. I am wondering, because of your answer to my last review, if Snape will grovel without promising concreted changes in himself. Also, I am very relieved that Draco is a free man, but I am not happy that he wants to move out. How ever will Harry be able to keep trying to seduce him if he isn't around? :(
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  • From RiverWhispers on August 13, 2010
    Hello darling!
    :)
    so, your story is quite the crowd pleaser. well, at least it pleases the crowd that sulks about in my head.
    anyways. i wanted to say that other than absolutely adoring how you write draco, i think harry is so lonely in this story. I feel like he doesn't really know where he's at emotionally in his life, so he tries to make up for it by doing things for others. It's like i want him to fall for draco without even realizing that he could need that type of relationship, but then again i like to read this as harry the little helper who is oblivious, or rather naive , to how his kind heartedness makes others feel about him.
    ha, im not sure if that's how you meant to be writing harry, but i will be following your story until the very end to see harry's character development.
    you're a good writer! Don't ever quit :)
    loves,
    river
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  • From niceladysakura on August 13, 2010
    thanks for updating!

    finally, severus realize, but harry and draco are still wary of him, i wonder how will he prove to them that he is being true and honest about his intention this time.

    please update soon
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  • From MaskedLily on August 12, 2010
    I'm definitly getting more and more excited to see what will happen. The raid on Harry's house had me giggling like no tomorrow. Especially because of Kreacher. That was a nice touch. And the letter Severus wrote is definitly a start even if it is a small one. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!! =)
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