Click Here!

Reviews for Love, Free as Air

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Rosalie Ayers on August 12, 2010
    Snape means it, he has to. But I think that Draco needs to make him wait, give Snape a chance to prove that he will be more open with thr feelings he obviously has (but too big headed to show them). And I wouldnt mind if Harry and Draco got together for a round of fun in bed :))
    Report Review

  • From Jicky on August 10, 2010
    although this chapter was quite wordy in the sense that it has a lot of soliloquy, it's not too boring and rather easy to follow and read.
    i appreciate good descriptive passages as much as good long dialogues, but they tend to lose me sometimes. so i'd say this chapter was a success in keeping it light and meaningful (not just keep babbling on)
    mildly surprised at Severus' train of thought, perhaps slightly out of character for him, but approaching Harry seems quite logical too.
    Report Review

  • From MaskedLily on August 10, 2010
    This was a good chapter. I'm really curious to see what Severus has written to Harry and what he plans on doing to get Draco back and actually keep him and possibly change himself.
    I like Ron and Hermione being closer to Harry than you usually write. It's a nice contrast to Chosen Chains lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job!! =)
    Report Review

  • From niceladysakura on August 09, 2010
    wonderful! i am happy for Draco hopefully we will be finally free soon

    and i am wondering about the letter Severus is going to write to Harry what will it be?an apology?or something else?

    please update soon
    Report Review

  • From RosalieAyers on August 09, 2010
    Awesome story you have going on here. I have been loving every new chapter that comes out. Keep up the good work, but may I say, I hope poor Snape gets something good out of all of this :(
    Report Review

  • From Jicky on August 09, 2010
    i'm hooked. simply cannot imagine how you will have the 3 men get together. so many possibilities. this makes me dearly wish they could be happy together.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angelmuziq on August 08, 2010
    Ha! Serves Snape right for penning a letter such as that. How cruel. I eagerly await reading how Draco will subtly seduce one Harry Potter. The hand in the hair was a good start. I hope more little touches and such will come along. I cant wait to see Harry fight for Draco during his trial and how Draco will react to that. And how nice and considerate Harry is to Draco. They should go out on a date! LOL. I know its too soon for that yet but I can dream. Loved it as always.
    Report Review

  • From niceladysakura on August 07, 2010
    thanks for updating!

    oh! i can't believe Draco wrote that, but im very proud of that... hmm. oh poor severus a stubborn snary man, when is he going to realize his loss?

    please update soon
    Report Review

  • From ANON - W on August 07, 2010
    WOHOOOO!!! Draco kicked ass!!!
    That letter was so great that I couldn't help laughing^^ Normally I like Severus, but here he is a right pain in the... backside. Serves him right to get a taste of his own medicine. He accused Draco of whining because he didn't get enough attention and yet he is doing the very same thing... The irony just kills me^^ I wondern when he recognises his own behaviour as the childish pouting it is...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mehla_Seraphim on August 06, 2010
    Oh. My. God. Draco wrote the best revenge letter. Could have only been better if it reacted like a stink bomb after the reader finishes it. Glad to see Draco a bit more mature from the start than you had him in that other threesome fic...I forget the name, but he was a tad more needy/whiny feeling in that one. I like that this Draco doesn't seem like he's trying to be a poser, oh so prim, and being totally judgmental. He's a a bit more of a free spirit. (Not trying to pun your title. I just couldn't think of another analogy.)
    Report Review

  • From MaskedLily on August 06, 2010
    There are some interesting twist in this story and I can't wait to see where it goes. And I like how good Ron and Hermione are being about Drado living with Harry. It's not something I thouht would happen right off. Fabulous job!! =)
    Report Review

  • From angelmuziq on August 03, 2010
    Im glad that Ron didnt fly off the handle. Its always refreshing to see a more mature Ron. I cant wait to see what you come up with next, especially in the way of the relationship between Harry and Draco. It was real cute when Draco leaned on Harry's shoulder. Its also nice to see Harry as the more confident on instead of the other way around. And I wonder if you are going to show how Snape handles being alone and his thoughts on all this. Love it all. Thanks for the great writing.
    Report Review

  • From niceladysakura on August 03, 2010
    thanks for updating..

    i hope somehow Draco will be able to cope up to a new lifestyle he is going to experience from now on..

    i do hope that Severus will come around and that somehow they will be back together, the three of them

    please update soon
    Report Review

  • From Cathartesaura on August 03, 2010
    I love what a prolific writer you are - you are one of the most dependably entertaining writers on this site! I'm enjoying this story and I appreciate the thought you put into your characters, and how much they care about each other. Good work and thanks for sharing.
    Report Review

  • From pittwitch on August 03, 2010
    Oh my, some little bird is whispering that we haven't seen the last of Severus, yet.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!