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Reviews for Dangerous Escapism

By : SilentGCanada
  • From Persy on August 24, 2021

    Ok, bad girl, here. I skipped to the last page and there simply MUST be retaliation on the ladies' part, there simply MUST be!!!! SNAPE MUST PAY!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - Ravenclaw Jedi on October 11, 2010
    This was an amazingly erotic and sexy story with just a touch of creepiness to make it all the more captivating. However, I was let down at the end. That sounds a lot worse than it is, but oh my god!!! This story had so many of my favorite things. Shall we?
    1. Well written
    2. Snape totally in character which is is so, so rare.
    3. Femslash!
    4. Improper use of spells.
    5. Screw it. This is pretty much the perfect story.

    But, oh my god! The build up with the girls and the lingerie and the seduction, seriously how many chapters, more and more and then they go to Snape and he is a right bastard and a puppet master and just evil but he gets his satisfaction in the end. But poor Hermione!! Towards the end, it was about his pleasure, but also the pleasure he got through contolling and manipulating her. And then she didn't....she wasn't allowed...dude, he didn't let her come!!! She begged him and he sent her away!

    I want to say I was let down and the story left me unfulfilled, but that sounds like a criticism, and I guess it kind of is, but the story is brilliant. I mean, I know from a narrative standpoint and a "I'm not writing this for creepy readers on AFF" standpoint that the ending is perfect. Because Snape is Snape. But I could not believe he did that to her!

    Your other story is amazing and Hermione more than gets hers there, but the dynamic between them is completely different and while Snape is a bastard in a sense, he's not like he is here. If I donate to your favorite charity or gave you my first born, would you consider writing a sequel to this? Oh, hell. I'm sitting here feeling bad for a fictional character who didn't get off. Yeah. I'm corrupted. Much love! RJ
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  • From ANON - Ro Laren on October 06, 2010
    Your Elizabethan advisor quote is from Blackadder II, episode 6 - 'Chains', Melchett says it to Edmund.

    Please can I have my detention now?

    Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - tinkerbell on July 22, 2010
    Please!!!!!!please!!!!!!!!!more!!!!!You have no idea how much I love this story!!!!!!!!!I need to have Severus @Hermione alone!!!!!!!with lots of sex!Please?
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  • From SecretLetterC on July 22, 2010
    I like it. I'm hoping to read some threesome in the later chapters. And I also thought about "True Lies" as I read this. I don't think you're copying it, don't get me wrong, it just gives me the same feeling. Anyhoo, great job. I shall continue to read now...
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  • From WesleyY7 on July 20, 2010
    Oh my God!! Someone shared this story with me once and I fell in love with it, but I could never remember where she had found it. Seriously, this is one of my favorite stories ever! Just the whole tone and the pacing of the seduction. I'm not a Snape fan at all, but he's such a perfect bastard in this. I can't wait to sit down and reread this again and give it a good and proper and probably rambly review. Thank you! :)
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