Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Star Sisters

By : sevsstarsisters
  • From Addicteddict on November 07, 2010
    OOOOMGGGGGG!!!! I love this story. I'm almoost done reading it! And I really love it!!
    I like the whole plot of the story, And I think your OC's are rather interesting, although I do think that I would like to hear something more from Charis, I feel like that most of the time it's all about Morgana. Like in the bigger situations it ends up with her. I miss to hear something more about Charis, of course i dunnot know if this is how it's just supposed to be. But sometimes it feels like it annoys me xD But I really respect each character. I would love to read the sequel of this one. :) I LOVE this story! One of the few long fanfictions I actually adore, (Since most of them ends up with too much Mary Sue), but this one I really like. I would just like to see more to Charis. (Not that I really don't but I hope you know what I mean, trying to come up with some possitive critism. :) Otherwise I have really nothing else to say than possitive stuff.) The writing is extremely good, I feel like I'm almost reading a book. :) And I learn so many new words xD Great story!! I only have a few more chapters to go but I'm sure I'll still like it to the very end!!
    Report Review

  • From Addicteddict on November 06, 2010
    This is SO great till now!! I really enjoy reading this, makes me feel like as if I'm in the damn fiction. Wishes that I would be too, sometimes Morgana's behaviour really annoys me, and I would feel sorry for Charis. But they're both well thought through characters. I like that. I barely noticed my friend came along and entered my room because I was too busy reading the BellaxMorgana shot from chapter four. Haha, for a Bisexual woman I approve on that being extremely hot. I LOVE IT!!
    Report Review

  • From Addicteddict on November 06, 2010
    Chapter one and chapter two made me even more curious to read further in this story. :O I think you've done great waking the curiousity in the reader already in the very first chapter. I like both OC's so much xD They're really great, so different which makes it great. Glad to see such a little rebel as Morgana tries to be.
    Thumbs up for both first chapters, I enjoyed, laughed, smiled and smirked when reding it. Watch out Snape :P
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on October 24, 2010
    AWWWWW! I'm so glad you guys posted the conclusion. And there's going to be a part two? Oh joy! I'm so excited! I was sucked right into this story, I even teared up a few times. This was very well written and wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.

    Ero
    xxoo
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on August 19, 2010
    GAAAAAAAAAAH! Wonderful! Superb! Brava! (As for the responding, you can leave a review yourself....AFF should have a more sophisticated system in that regard...) Man. That was fantastic! All of it! Well, of course I am sad for Morganna, and sad for Charis now, even though she and Snape did the nasty like she wanted...I can only portend broken hearts from here forward....nothing happy...BUT....I nearly wet myself while laughing at Snape calling Dumbledore a twinkly eyed fucker. That was brilliant! Genius! Really. ^.^ I cannot wait to read more. Thank you for taking the time to write this story and share it with us.

    xoxo
    Ero
    Report Review

  • From oliversangel on July 27, 2010
    OMG! This story is fantastic! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story and share it with us. I have always felt so bad for Snape. When Harry went inside the pensieve, and looked at all of Snape's memories, I sobbed buckets and buckets. That poor poor man, he never really had any happiness in life. And then I calmed down again, until I read the epilogue...and when Harry said, "Albus Severus.." WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH! JK Rowling made me cry soooo much. Anywho...I love your story, I love Charis and Morgana's friendship, I love how they both are after Snape, and I love that he is wrestling with feelings of his own towards the girls. His reflection on hating to have the person you love tell you that you don't love them was heartbreaking....hence all the Snape reminiscing in the beginning. Can't wait until the next update, everything is just brilliant and well written, and very detailed.....

    xxoo
    Ero
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!