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Reviews for The Auror and the Fountain

By : wherdatcomfrom
  • From bloodshound on June 07, 2013
    wow, a lot packed into that chappie.
    still, heathrow? you're naming him after a hedge? ah well, no accounting for taste. still if my father had his way, and my twin younger sisters had been born boys, they would have been heath and laeth... thank glory they were born girls. ma has far better taste in names. (talitha and bonita) kids still going to catch hell at school... though with the weird wizarding names out there, maybe not.

    wow, those horcruxes were fecking evil, damaging pieces of junk huh.
    so where does this leave har, legal wise in regards to his wife? can he divorce her in absenteeism or something? eh, he and draco are a far better match anyway. gah, draco's ex sounds like a total shrew.
    so, nearly done, done and onto the next one?
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  • From bloodshound on August 24, 2012
    Nigel?! In what alternate universe is Nigel a good name?! It comes under the heading of what the baby name books call 'a character building name' i.e. expect your kid to get ragged on, bullied and beaten up at school because of it. Pls, let Stan keep his name and don't change it to something so namby-pamby and nancy boy sounding. I'm surprised Percy wasn't absolutely persecuted with that name. Then, maybe the english are more tolerant towards such names than the yanks and the aussies.

    I'm glad Al's okay with har and draco's sort of developing relationship. I don't know what will happen if the effects on Gin are reversed but considering her paranoia, I'd say they'll definitely split. I persnoally think it might not be such a bad thing if they didn't get fixed. sure the babies would have to go through everything again, but personally, i can think of worse fates. I know the fountain is sealed and stuff now, but if i was given the choice of be rendered back to a baby or the Kiss, I'd go with baby myself. The only prob is you'd have to find unbiased ppl to raise the kid.

    I hope scorpi and Har's other kids will be equally understanding.

    For shopping with a teen girl, that was rather mild.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 23, 2012
    Shouldn't try to tease your father! Too funny!!!
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  • From bloodshound on August 19, 2012
    WB, been a while, neh?
    heh, oh my did young Al get an eyefull? Well, that's what he gets for peeking. :P
    Well, that's that troublesome well hopefully dealt with. It will be interesting to see if the enchantment can be reversed. If not, i guess Stan and Gin get a second chance at life... quite literally.
    Will any of your other stories be updating? I remember there were some really good ones.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 19, 2012
    I'm sooo liking this!!! Is there hope for Ginny or will she have to grow up again?
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  • From ANON - RReh on October 21, 2011
    Well, I like what I've read so far.
    I mean, there is not much of a plot yet, as it is only the beginning of the story, but I'm pretty sure that will change soon enough.
    Only one thing though - not all that important, but I'm strange like that. You wrote "the GEIS as the knight bus conductor". It took me nearly half a minute to get that you probably meant "the GUIS of the knight bus conductor".
    I know it's silly to point out but still...xD.....
    Other than that, nice work!
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  • From bloodshound on September 09, 2011
    i'm glad Har isn't being daft enough to refuse Malfoy out of left over guilt. I'm also glad he has a plan regarding the fountain. Thats NOT something you want to leave laying around.
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  • From bloodshound on July 29, 2011
    ... well, it was certainly passionate.
    can't wait to see if the water can be cured... and i agree with Harry. Malfoy elder needs to get over it, stop stressing and move one. Malfoy younger has, and how.
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2011
    Now THIS was a fun idea. Pity it ain't finished yet. :P
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  • From ANON - darkshadowarchfiend on September 21, 2010
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!! I SERIOUSLY HATED THAT ROWLING'S GAVE DRACO A RECEDING HAIR LINE!!!!!! I MEAN REALLY????? DRACO WAS THE SAME AGE AS LUCIUS AND HE HAD A FULL HEAD OF HAIR!!!!!!! BITCH!!!!!! (Not you Rowlings). Anyway I was glad to see you brought Lucius and Narcissa back to full health. It was depressing to see them like that. Not to happy about Hermione acting like she's the only smart one around. I really don't like her!!!! Anywho and yes I said anywho I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!! THIS IS SOOO EXCITING!!!!!!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 06, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 9!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 16, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 8!!!
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  • From ANON - Gen on August 16, 2010
    I think you would be epilogue compliant if your story took place 22 years after the final battle since the epilogue took place 19 years later and Al and Scorpious were 11 years old. Anyways, I like it so far...
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  • From thrnbrooke on August 10, 2010
    Sooo need chapter 7!!! Why did it turn Ginny and Stan into babies but only made Harry appear younger?
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  • From ANON - angelmuziq on August 10, 2010
    MMMmmm let me guess.. its like the fountain of youth. LOL i'm a genius. The babies are obviously Stan and Ginny. Hopefully Harry will now realize this so he can help Ginny...tho maybe shed be better left as a baby.. shoot Stan probably would as well.. hehe. I have yet to figure out what Draco means in all of this. How will they come together? I am very intrigued by this fic please continue writing.
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