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Reviews for Pureblood Charm

By : DraconsMate
  • From StarrCrystal on June 03, 2013
    Will this ever be updated? I really hope so!
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  • From mattcun on October 10, 2012
    plz write more have blaise fuck her
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  • From ANON - Kia on December 03, 2011
    Update!!!!!! Please
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  • From StarrCrystal on February 08, 2011
    Wow... When is the next chapter coming out? This is kinda funny in a twisted way
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  • From ANON - kelsy on December 26, 2010
    update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Gracie on October 05, 2010
    More,please
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  • From ANON - jen on September 27, 2010
    Very hot, thanks.
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  • From ANON - lanetk on August 25, 2010
    update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SydB on August 04, 2010
    Oh dear, how do I put this?
    Since you may have a nice idea there (I wouldn't have opened your story if you hadn't), I stopped reading half through the first chapter.
    I think it's very important to draw your possible readers into the plot, seeing the characters the way you see them.
    What I read from your story made a red light in my head blink and a voice scream "OOC!"
    Your characters don't act or sound like the ones I want to read about. The typical HP FF reader knows his characters extremely well, and Hermione and Draco just don't feel right at all.
    Well, what I wanted to tell you was: Please work on your characterisation and plot development, for your style and wording are just fine.
    And please, don't be angry with me for critcising you, I myself have gotten some very harsh words throughout my 'writing career' and, although they could have been said much more polite, I realised that people were right, worked on what they told me and got better - not perfect, but better.

    Hugs and kisses,

    Syd, who really does not want to offend you!
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