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Reviews for Revelations

By : Pheobi
  • From dominique1 on August 05, 2010
    okay but who put the spell on harry
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  • From dominique1 on August 05, 2010
    that was brill the way you turn harry into looking at sev really looking at the man
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  • From dominique1 on August 05, 2010
    i like but i kinda feel bad because its a joke
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  • From dominique1 on August 05, 2010
    So far i like that you made draco more likable
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  • From wynja on August 05, 2010
    AAwww! Thank you for the dedication! I'm going to repay you by another stupid question... I'm an ungreatful bastard, and that's the way it is... anyway, I reread the last 2 chapters before the new one today, because I was so damn tired last night I swear I was half nodding off and dreaming by the end... not YOUR fault, you understand, just work and my inability to stop reading... aaaaanyway, the stupid question... I was a little surprised that Snape bought Harry's potion-story... I mean he KNOWS about the curse, right, so either he would think that Harry just wanted to take the edge off for a bit longer (I'm just guessing sex would make the effect go away longer than kissing?) OR/AND since he knows about the curse he should know about the ways to make it stop (I do think Harry's crazy for having a baby, but I'll slap him around later. Not polite to do that to a pregnant person anyway...) so wy was he so VERY easilly convinced when he didn't even really want to kiss him before...? Drunk? Horny out of his mind? As usual with me (as you know by now) I have probably missed something vital, which is very plain to everyone else, which explains this... anyway, I'm glad he noticed the taste, maybe he'll get suspicious... I guess I have to wait an see...
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  • From wynja on August 04, 2010
    Hi! Sorry for being an idiot! When i opened the story today, I saw the first A/N, and there the explanation was.... felt so stupid... sorry again. YOu don't deserve stupid readers like me... but I'm going to stick around anyway... ;)Oh, there's a lot of chapters to read today... aaarrggh, and I'm half falling asleep, I'm so tired... but I can't sleep with more to read...
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  • From Kinnikuman on August 04, 2010
    Hey, great story so far. I love how in-character you keep everyone and how realistic it all feels, it's fresh and interesting throughout, and you seem to really get inside the characters' heads. That said the chapters are a tad too short, (just finished six) it's like 'bam bam bam - next chapter!' and there isn't time to digest what's happened, which is a shame as this story has a lot of potential and I think you could be one of the better fanfic authors on the site :) I just think maybe a little more forward-planning, description and length - everything else such as plot, characters and imagery you have perfect :)
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  • From MorganaWhite on August 04, 2010
    This story is absolutely brilliant! I love it so much! Please update soon!
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  • From yaoified on August 03, 2010
    oh but, shuichi jacket was ORANGE and yellow, not black >.
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  • From yaoified on August 03, 2010
    oh man! shuichi!!!! i love you!
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  • From Elvira on August 03, 2010
    OOOOOOOOO!!!!

    Can't wait for more!!!

    Loved it very much!

    Update soon!
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  • From wynja on August 03, 2010
    Wow! Two more chapters already? Great! I'm a bit confused about what you answered Arya, though... is this Revelations the same as the old one (I haven't read that one so I wouldn't know) or are you rewriting it, or what? I'm just confused because it says in the A/N that you don't know where it is headed and then that the story was finished...? I just like the idea of a finished story, because that means more of this goodness pretty soon! ;)
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  • From wynja on August 03, 2010
    -lol- love it! So funny! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - arya on August 03, 2010
    I've read the story before but it was never finished. However I hope that you truly finish this story this time, because i just love the plot. Especially the interaction between snape and harry, with snape not giving in too easily. However in the future I hope that harry doesn't get together with anyone else, or something. I want him to be a virgin for snape ;) since severus deserves the best :)
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  • From Silzar19 on August 02, 2010
    Love it. this is so cute. I like how it starts out as a dare and Harry pushes until he ends up seeing what he claims he already likes. I cna't wiat for more.
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