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Reviews for Tussle

By : Ravengirl7
  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2010
    Well
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2010
    LOL Loved the insight into their thoughts. Poor Draco, neck deep in denial, and Hermione, as practical as I would expect her to be, yet still fighting her own demons. Wonder what Draco will be thinking when he does get his hand up her blouse, or heaven forbid, her skirt. ;) :)
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  • From warangel820 on August 19, 2010
    Not as exciting as the other chapters. But a story can't be all action, some of it has to be plot:) Some very nice writing though, please post the next chapter soon!
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  • From jaceni00 on August 19, 2010
    Ah! You definately have me on pins and needles. :D Really liked the fact that you are explaining the characters more and can't wait to see another encounters. I would be great if you didn't skip another year, but whatever you have prepared is probably good. Hope you update soon. :)
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  • From CimiRace on August 12, 2010
    It was great! The first encounter was hilarious, Draco's embarrassment was hilarious. When in doubt, take away points :)

    I really liked the next encounter, I think the "dry humping" was absolutely a logical progression. It just doesn't feel very realistic to me in Hogwarts-era when they all of a sudden jump right to full-on sex. And, it was totally hot! Loved reading it.

    Can't wait for you next chapter!
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  • From Rosamund on August 12, 2010
    fun smut! Loved it! :)
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  • From jaceni00 on August 12, 2010
    Great chapter. It has enough to keep you going, but not too over the top for the beginning. Great job. I'm glad you clarified what happened in chapter 1 and it's even better than what I had imagined. Can't wait to see what else happens. :D
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  • From StillHorny on August 11, 2010
    can't wait for "round two" ;)
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  • From Tenshinhan on August 11, 2010
    It was nice. Kind of hard to figure if they had sex though, or if it only was dry hu,ping...
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2010
    Poor Draco, caught out in the aftermath of a dry hump and wondering what the hell to do about it. LOL

    I'm assuming you're taking this story further by the steady build up? Only a matter of time before they get underneath those pesky uniforms and then Draco really will be wondering what the hell he's doing. LOL

    I don't mean for this to sound condescending, for that isn't my intention, but good for you on taking the next step into smutty delight! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2010
    It definitely has potential and I certainly wanted more. :) I would add though, don't write anything with which you're not completely comfortable, but if there's some more naughtiness in you - bring it. ;) :)
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  • From dragongirl on August 09, 2010
    A battle of wills and confrontations? Bring it on!
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  • From chyara on August 09, 2010
    It's cute as it is. But I wouldn't mind additional scenes. Especially on what he did when she said make me.
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  • From margaritama on August 08, 2010
    LMAO...great ending. I was a bit confused as to the years but it was very funny.
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  • From jaceni00 on August 08, 2010
    Hey, interesting begginning. I thought the ending was kinda abrupt, but still left me intrigued. Hope you update soon.
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