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By : GryffindorToy
  • From luna4917 on August 26, 2010
    I'm loving this story!! I can't wait to see what happens when they realise they've been writing to one another all along, even as they've been falling in love.

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  • From RosalieAyers on August 26, 2010
    Clapping my hands on a third chapter well done! I love where this is going. Please Please Please update asap :)
    I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Mila-Renae on August 26, 2010
    Fantastic chapter! Best yet! Loved the bit about having to loan Ron a dictionary so he could understand. haha. Brillent. I can't wait for an update! If you are on ff.net (I tried to find you) look me up. My screen name is the same as on here.

    xoxo

    Mila-Renae
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  • From Ravengirl7 on August 26, 2010
    Very cute. I especially enjoy the way you write Hermione. I look forward to your next chapter!
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  • From Solariel89 on August 26, 2010
    I'm enjoying this, immensely. And i'm impressed that I actually had to look up a word that you used! So few people have been able to do that, it's refreshing to find one who can.
    I am undecided on how I like to view the Malfoy family relationships, but I find that I rather enjoy Lucius as the cruel dictator type AND as the kind caring father figure. That being said, I like the way you have him portrayed here.
    And I like the letters between the two. Draco's are just a bit more snarky than Hermione's. I would enjoy it if you made them a bit snarkier as they get to know each other better. But, you are the author so I'll leave that up to you. XD
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on August 26, 2010
    Awesome! More please!
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  • From xoxobabii on August 26, 2010
    I CANT WAIT UNTIL THEY FIGURE IT OUT
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  • From thatsjustit on August 25, 2010
    aww i like it! please continue
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  • From macropixi on August 25, 2010
    this has a great deal of promise!
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  • From ANON - Mila-Renae on August 15, 2010
    I really enjoyed the first two chapters. I love how you've managed to soften our image of Draco, yet make him stronger at the same time. I must say I am EXTREAMLY interested to know what this book contains. Oh and owl love is just too cute. :)
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  • From luna4917 on August 14, 2010
    Quite liked the second installment. It was interesting to get a little peek into Draco's life. I'm curious how his 'Father' (I use that word loosely) will be able to control him once he's back at school though? He won't be able to subject him to the same punishments without people noticing. And I'm sure, given the circumstances, that Hermione would forgive his use of 'that' word. Looking foreward to the next chapter.
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  • From luna4917 on August 14, 2010
    I didn't read the first version, but I'm enjoying the second quite a bit. It will be interesting to watch the relationship grow between the two and how it effects their normal interactions. And how sweet is it that the owls have fallen in love! Off to read chapter 2.
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  • From Insolence on August 14, 2010
    Hmm... Haven't read the first version so I have nothing to compare against, but I DO like what I've seen so far.

    Interesting twist on Draco's character. Do we get to see why he chose to think outside the pureblood elitist box?
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  • From ANON - paigeey07 on August 13, 2010
    very nice
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  • From amerereader on August 13, 2010
    I like the story so far and am excited to see where it leads! :-) Please update soon!

    - A Mere Reader
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