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Reviews for A Step in Time

By : rachelmania
  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 17, 2010
    You haven't lost me and I enjoyed that update. I love that they each partially revert to 17 again when they see one another. I look forward to seeing how they interact when they as adults have to act like teenagers again. Should prove interesting. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From RynStar15 on September 01, 2010
    I am very much enjoying this story. What an interesting concept! Please write more soon!! :)
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  • From janasi83 on August 26, 2010
    You have a great story in the making there, but those bite-sized pieces that shift back and forth at the speed of a tennis ball played by professionals just make me want to throttle something (as in the narrator *wink wink*). It would work in a movie perhaps, but don't forget that in a movie, you also get all sorts of visual data to process, whereas in writing you only get the words and this is really awfully hard to read and follow. At least to me. :)
    I think maybe at least 3 longer paragraphs per POW would be nice.

    I think you paint a really good picture of the characters, they seem real and alive, even through the staccato glimpses. I'm very interested in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2010
    Such a contrast between their lovemaking skills - and realistic, too. Can't all be sex gods. (more's the pity - LOL) Draco shines in his bad boy role as does Hermione is her good girl persona. Can't wait to see when a little of that bad meets a touch of that good. :) Again, loved the humour. Well done. :)
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  • From LovableLoser on August 23, 2010
    Very interesting beginning. I am very much looking forward to the rest of the story!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 21, 2010
    Interesting beginning and I look forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2010
    I can see we're going to have a lot of humerous moments just from the title of your chapter alone. :) Love the idea of a split time vortex and having to go back and straigten things out (though I use the term loosely). I can't wait to see how they'll act as supposed 17 year olds given they are in their early 20's with quite a few experiences shall we say, under their belts. I look forward to your next chapter. :)
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on August 20, 2010
    What an interesting take on the 7th year Draco and Hermione pairing we all love!

    Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out. :)

    Lady B*
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