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Reviews for Artist Eyes

By : akutenshi2001
  • From CodyMThomas on February 27, 2011
    Nope, you didn't lose me. The photographer isn't creepy either. Dedicated yes, and obviously falling in love with our snarky Severus. I'm married to an artist, and they do become this involved with their work on a regular basis, so I think you are portraying that quite accurately. I would love to read more.
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  • From CodyMThomas on February 27, 2011
    I was wary because of the mention of the OC at first, ventured in because I was curious, and I stayed because this really was an amazing style that you wrote as well as a great story. I loved the descriptions of the photographs and thought it was extremely kinky when paired with the slash. This works very well without the story having too many details or having them be bogged down with a ton of dialog. In so doing your photographer OC remained a photographer OC instead of becoming a Gary Stu, and I applaud you for that.

    I'm glad I read this, and I hope you decide to write in this style again.
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  • From hellangelhellina on August 30, 2010
    I was not lost with this chapter but I am obbsess with Severus myself. I dont know who he should be with I say let it run and it'll come to you. I feel kind of sad. I feel like you stole my Severus and shared it with the world. But at the same time I am glad that I am not the only one that finds him beautyful. I want to cry and smile at the same time. I guess I relate with the potographer when it come to Severus. Well can't wait to see what comes of this.
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  • From sesshomarufangirl on August 28, 2010
    I love your story and can't wait until you update. I would prefer if you kept the pairing between Snape and the photographer but if you decide to do a Remus and Snape pairing I guess that could work too. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From RogueMudblood on August 28, 2010
    First, I'll leave the full disclaimer warn to the mods.

    Second, I thought your summary was fine. But if you'd prefer something else, you might try the next to last line in your first chapter: "My exhibit was a roaring success. People reacted just as I knew they would. They saw him. Hell, I think Severus finally saw himself." (I edited a little)

    Or: "The eyes were
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  • From Orkchild on August 27, 2010
    Wonderful, haunting more please.
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