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Reviews for The Guardian of Slytherin

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From ANON - Smurphy on September 14, 2010
    Great chap:-)) I liked how Pansy changed the view of how Ron saw this but he is still an idiot.... Looking forward to what happens next
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  • From KellyJCR on September 14, 2010
    I have to agree with you. This is not considered genocide and this is fanfiction. No one is holding a wand to their head and making them read this. If they don't like it they should move along. I however am loving the story. The banter between Severus, Lucius and Hermione never gets old. My only complaint is I need more. I do understand that you have a life to live I am just an instant gratification kind of gal. So don't want to wait but, will have to if I must. Well done!!!!
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  • From katiekrm on September 13, 2010
    You know, I'm usually the one bothered by things in fics no one else brings up, but I never saw this as a genocide fic. Of course, as you said, murder is wrong, but as you also said, you're not trying to put any messages out there. I have thoroughly enjoyed this and I love how many of the characters you have in it. I love the protective, charming and close relationship between Hermione and Severus. Marcus and Ginny are hilarious. Keep up the good work!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on September 13, 2010
    oh wow! bellatrix had it coming! I love this story and didn't even think it was remotely close to genocide at all!! what to we do with evil? throw them in jail and give them the chair....is that not what you're doing in the this story? people are stupid in my opinion....LOVE the story, update soon!
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  • From chris7100 on September 13, 2010
    Oooooooh - Very fitting end to dear old Bella. Severus's remark about attaching Ron's bits to his forehead made me snort :-)

    As for the genocide kerfuffle (how's that for an oxymoron), the events in this plot in no way meet the definition of genocide. It's simply ridiculous to even think it. If anything, this appears to be some form of divine retribution being enacted through occasional possession of a human agent. Gruesome? Yes. Rough justice? Yes? Genocide? ABSOLUTELY NOT! This kind of high stakes moral testing (complete with harsh and even fatal penalties) is a staple of the Western Tradition and can be found everywhere from medieval Grail stories through modern films and and literature (Raiders of the Lost Ark anyone?). Clearly redemption (or possibly even salvation) is readily available to those who truly regret their actions and are committed to moving forward on a better path. You've done a good job with the archtype without sounding preachy - don't let anyone tell you differently. ...Carefully stepping down off the soap box now... More on Sev and Hermione's back story soon please...
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  • From dragongirl on September 13, 2010
    The end of Bellatrix was simply scary........ This Guadian that you created is my kind of guardian.... LOL
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  • From KellyJCR on September 13, 2010
    Wow Harry with Regulus and Rabastan. Didn't see that coming. It seems that Harry is turning into quite the little man whore. However, it was a nice change of pace from who he is usually paired with. Love the relationship between Hermione and Severus. Had to laugh when Severus told her not to call him sweet. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - TammaraG on September 13, 2010
    Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From katiekrm on September 12, 2010
    Aaawwwwww...I love your Severus and Hermione. I am so glad that Regulus told Harry like it is and that he lost his chance for a nice bloke b/c he's not nice!
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  • From ANON - winters on September 12, 2010
    This is such an interesting and wonderfully written story. I hope it's going to last more than just a few more chapters. Please no puppies or kittens necessary just more stories.
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  • From catysmom1028 on September 12, 2010
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From zairaphel on September 12, 2010
    Wow... I had to play catch-up with the last few chapters, and I must say I am pretty happy with the way things are shaping up. Aside from a huge "well done!" for your work so far I have a few other comments.

    -You've written Ron up to be a complete arse. It's pretty well the way I (and a great many other people, I would venture to guess) have always imagined him.

    -I'm very curious to hear more about Hermione and Severus as far as a back story goes. Can't wait to know just how that all came about as I can imagine it may have been a rather interesting story.

    -Boy, Harry is something. Clearly the boy has been thinking with his tadger a bit too much. Though I must say that perhaps jumping into bed with Rabastan and Regulus is just what he needs. Two handsome, strapping men to pound some sense into him... I admit to being more interested in this section of the plot line than I should be!

    I can't wait to read the next handful of chapters!
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  • From chris7100 on September 12, 2010
    I review faithfully, but desperate pleas tend to discourage rather than encourage that. Also, I'd like to provide more substantive reviews, but the brevity of many of your chapters militates against it. Not saying you should make your chapters longer - you're the writer and should do whatever works for you!!! - but that it's tough to draft a meaty review when the chapters are short. So, as for this chapter - makes sense that Harry's a sub. R&R ought to do wonders for him. Glad he's not going to be paired with Draco; it's gets old. What's up with Severus? Still recovering or something more? Impatiently waiting for more explanation on how Hermione and he got together, as well as a Ron beat-down.
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  • From ANON - - on September 12, 2010
    i luv it
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  • From faerieflightz on September 12, 2010
    I'm really enjoying ur story! Please update soon! I can't wait for a new chapter!
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